My Lover Ran Away - Reviews

I hope this is as good as I expect it to be. Gonna be pretty disappointed if it isnt ngl. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

hey everyone the author speaking, please if you have any suggestions or noticed some mistakes I made I would appreciate it if u pointed it out, I would love to get better and be able to share my ideas with the world through my stories.

That's a really interesting story setting, especially those dark elements in the prologue, I found it's really interesting.Your ideas for the story is really special and different from any other works I have read, I don't know how should I put it, but it's a good different. I'm impressed at your courage and creativity in writing this unique idea of story background.

so far I have read 23 chapter and all I understand from them isthis world rule by a witches and witches can't use there own mana to cast magic they need mana from men not all the men have mana though.if men use there own mana to cast magic and if they successfully able to cast magic considered as a magi but also criminal if witches find out there's a men who can use is own mana to cast magic they are killed by witches.

Eve: Way?! *sigh* I have to meet him no matter what.

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[Card: Fairy blast T1

kioz go back home but in middle of the way when he want to go home he see the one who get bullied at school early training at playground then he go and ask

Done upto 108 and it's pretty good until now. The author is taking worldbuilding at a slow pace but this way, it's easier to digest and there is not much of an info dump compared to other novels. I personally like this MC since he uses his damn head and doesn't go around fighting people when he's weak. I really like Amelia but it's clear that the author wants Clara to be the FL so I'm kinda disheartened.... I mean, I don't mean that I hate Clara but I just like Amelia more. The dynamic between them is so good thay I wouldn't mind an harem. It's done really well, but please just two will be enough. Amelia and Clara. Pleaseeeeeee