inconsistent, no background (world/characters), two dimensional characterstime is a lie. for example a character, 3000+ years old doesn't know of a war from 500 years ago, which changed continent's.
I recommend you all starting at (Arial) volume 2 new and improved besides (Jane and Stacey) volume 1. The reason I say this is because each chapter don't have much words in it in volume 1 but it's still fun to read if you want to read it.Originally this was supposed to be about characters in diffrent time and dates in this world. So I’m going to try to focus on one character so to not to confuse the readers and make it easier on myself with all the character developments.
this is a very nice novel although there are spelling mistakes and missing words my mind auto corrects it any way.... I am a bit concerned with the fact this hasn't been updated for a month but I will keep on waiting cause I am wondering on how the novel will progress!
Cooking and comedy are my kind of thing. I just hope the storyline is good. Too bad though there isn't much information from the synopsis. On the positive note, the cover photo is kinda catchy so I think I give this one a try. (if it doesnt require any spirits yet ?)
jake "I will finish this BANKAI"he yelled a burst of energy eurupts from his body before he disappears behind the cell juniors "Getsuga Tenshō" wave of black energy erupted from his sword and burned the rest of the cell juniors to ash
