My legendary class is Husband Of Deathwill Sisters?! - Reviews

This book is so much better than the other books you wrote. I don’t think you should let the criticism get to you but use it as a tool to learn and not drop this novel from it like the last novel.

this novel is underated, and the reason is probably because the title, tags and sinopse, if you look at those you think this novel will be about playing a realistic game with OP cheats, but this description could not be more wrong, i mean the system and game aspects of the novel is so irrelevant that we dont even know the stats of anyone Mc included, this novel is more about family bonds, is about the MC learning how to be a responsible adult and learning how to take care of his family, the whole journey is focused on that, all those other things like the system and game are basically secondary, the fights of the novel also sucks so i think thats why this novel is underated.

Only 470 chaps, I cant even fill my stomach with that.

Not even the cracks between my teeth.

Okk..

Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting.

Only plot hole so far seems to be when the mc did 10 million damage to an enemy a few hours after logging into the game. Granted, some skills and techniques were used, but no where grand or powerful enough to do 10 mill to an enemy with 1500 hp.

mate everything was fine and dandy. the story was good the character was good the background is kinda mysterious. the update stability so far is nice but there are some problems that author really needs to think about.  first of all what is this book about. it's game so you need to make it clear the data about the enemyy when they fight the reward that he gets,the quest that he takes, etc but instead this novel is like an urban slice of life romance type paced story or even an Japanese high school type story which is inconsistent from my point which makes it barely readable like a game novel should be and another point is the exaggeration of expression. for eg. if I say he smiled,".........." which makes sense but when you put he widely smiled,".........." then that makes it extremely exaggerated for me. if it's once or twice it's fine but if it's after every single time that he smiles you put widely after it then it makes it unpalatable for me. overall everything is extremely good but author should definitely focus on what he is writing about if he wants to make the novel a top class which the reader want to read again and again.
thank you
your sincere reader

It’s only the start but I’ve been hooked. The author has given a nice fresh take on the genre that works really well. The characters are independent and unique, and so far the novel seems well thought out. I still don’t have a clue what the overarching purpose of the story is yet, but I’m enjoying it this far. (Chap 30)

Interesting premise, and a pretty cool 'legendary class'.
I feel like I'm reading a romance-type novel that has been put into a video-game shell. Kind of like "Pride and prejudice and zombies".
Not that I'm complaining, I like it so far and I'm only 2 chapters in :)
Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.
(Also we are around the same ranking - my book is 'My Necromancer Class', so I thought I'd check out your book out and I'm enjoying it, keep it up!)

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10/10.......................................................................................................................................

Is his wife's just in virtual game?