MY IMMORTAL CITY - Reviews

this is my review based on the limited chapter I've read so far. the story is somewhat interesting and that's off 8 chaps,there are a few issues I face regarding this novel the dialogue is somewhat lacking interaction doesnt have the flow I envisioned tho maybe it's just with me  secondly the characters, their designs can be easily forgotten but otherwise from that I know this novel will be great in the future

pls if you plan to make a new zombie novel in future, then could you make it like, where mc either play solo or is kind of indifferent and cold and only care about himself and no one else. He may have goal like survive, become strong or become god or something, ...........maybe one day. Well i just want to see a dark novel with strong mc and with a zombie setting where betrayal , killing, backstabbing .. ....should be kind of normal if you are weak. Like Survival of fittest or strong and weak meat or something like that. Even though i didn't like much but still your story is great, so keep up good  work.

a great masterpiece..................................................................................................................................................................

I like the story and how light it is, there is no too much angst and all that. The story develops nicely and it is a good read when you are tired and just wanna relax with something that won't give you heart palpitations and frustrations.

Reminds me of a much better novel called thirty years of demon slaying at the demon slaying department. Go read that basically the same novel just more detailed.

Beautiful!!! The story is so well written there weren't any possible punctuation or spell mistakes grammatical errors were low to none. The characters had the different and interesting mindset, the thoughts of the characters were deep The novel is a worth read Good work author

Novel is good, but unfinished synopsis.                                                                                                    .

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Excellent decision to add unreadable codes for objects so he has to scan it first.. removes most of the OP setting he can't create anything he wants willy nilly.. like say, add enchants, potion effects and basically creative mode if there is one.. hope he achieves that in the end and he'll truly be in god mode right there

Hi, My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!

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