My Heart Beats For You, - Reviews

This review is based on the free chapters.It has a similar concept to Trafford's Trading Club (buy anything as long as you can pay for it), and although I like such settings, I'm personally not a super big fan of this novel. It's okay, but I find the biggest problem is that I'm not a fan of how much killing is going on and how arrogant the MC is as soon as he obtains the power of the Bank. I'm never a big fan of characters that solve all their problems through brute force and killing. Idk, it just makes it feel a little lackluster, especially if the entire novel is just going to be like this, collecting debts by killing people until the succumb. This type of novel is also the type that seems like it can easily become repetitive. Trafford's Trading Club was much better, it actually had some very moving stories, meanwhile this is just so... mediocre in comparison (that being said, they are quite different despite having the similar setting of buying whatever you desire).

This book is wonderful, you are a great writer. Looking forward to reading future chapters, although wondering when he will start romancing Aurora. Anyways great job and keep Up the good work. Stable and great story, decenct fights but could be better more detailed I mean. Great world description and much more.

There are a few small mistakes in writing which can be a slight turn off, but not enough to ruin this amazing book. The author actually out a lot of thought into the background of his story and has his characters thought out. I haven't seen much character development yet. But the story is still new and I can't wait to see what happens.

Shamelessly rating my own work. Please leave a review either good or bad, I will learn to write better when handling my next works. thanks so much for reading my first novel.

This novel is very good, I hope there will be more sequels. This novel is very good, I hope there will be more sequels. This novel is very good, I hope there will be more sequels.

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stop✋ you have to check out this book, it's is well detailed and the story development is simply out of this worldgood work Mr author ??

He leaned back looking at the text with his head cocked and sent back a response,

"I am the person you saved earlier at the washroom. 'Lin Ren' spoke.

The aforementioned Lord had broken formation far too soon. Whether it was eagerness or fear he had thrown the well placed plan into disarray. there was nothing to it. Brenjulf gave the signal and the horns began to blow. Forward it was. The rest of the army moved forward with their shields up. The advantage of surprise was lost now. They had no choice.

"It's alright nee-san besides look i am now a genin...hehe"

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?