MY FIRST TIME SYSTEM - Reviews

author can u please post \" Behind that door \" story in GN ... i didn't get to read it yet but was so intrigued to read it when u showed a glimpse of that story oh his broken angel

The story is kinda confusing in the beginning but slowly smooths itself out over the next few dozen chapters. The translation quality is...not bad? But the translation rate is absolutely horrid. Never seen a worse rate than this aside from world defying dan God. They might be on par with each other idk. Welp I'll be dropping this till like another 100+ chapters gets released.Cya

Hello author, hope you had a good day (or night) depends. So I have seen your work, today I will review your novel and I think you are doing fine with your narrations. I can still see that it can be improved. The narrations were direct and concise. It was a nice story all in all and Such cuddly and heart pumping in some places. What a beautiful novel you have. I think I have to read more as I am just on the tip of the iceberg. Making me see just a shallow part of it. But so far, I can see its potential. Good luck in the Spirity! Hope you win! Have a five star to brighten you up. ✨

Even if the name is changed this novel is better than most trash that get released on Webnovel every week I like the story.???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Very nice kingdom building novel. The story neither fast or slow, it is just enough so that we can understand the concepts and not to slow that it gets boring later on. MC is the ideal for this kind where he is careful and calculative, not arrogant but also not someone like a super good guy.

That's much beyond my expectations. The hype and actions you will feel in the first few chapters will make you want to keep reading. And when you will read the last chapter, you will be left wondering about the story and would wish for more chapters. UPLOAD MORE CHAPTERS! Yes, that was for you author.

truthfully your book has got me hooked. it told with a very relaxing style of narractive. Opal is a very nice character, and from what I have seen presently, a simple one (as of now). can't wait to see her growth as a character.    though I want to know if she gets a love interest. but a nice book. kudos author

"Why do you asked?".(Eon)

'Jung jötun kommen'

Kaylah then removed her panties and placed them on the mans' face, while asking "Do you enjoy the smell?" She reached for his belt buckle and removed the belt. She used his belt as a makeshift collar. While she pulled on the collar, Kaylah rubbed his legs. She placed her face near his thigh and blew on his underwear. After placing her fingers near his manhood, she grabbed her knife, and slightly cut into his chest.  When blood covered a nipple, she licked it clean.  

I saw you

Ryu knew that for now he could not keep the promise made to Ultear but in the future he would make sure to fulfill it.