The story has some bullsh*t history tied to it and thats fine with me. The world development is pure and utter crap. The character have no depth whatsoever. The MC is too OP if your into that then it might be fine but for me it was bad. The currency exchange rate for in-game money is a load of horse ****. In my opinion the story has good potential if it has bit more depth and realism mixed into it. This is just my rant about the novel.
I like this story, one of my favourites.everything about it is good except for the super duper very slow dead snail pace release!NieLi! you must not make Ning'er sad or I'll kill you!
NOVEL IS GOOD. CHARACTER PROGRESSION IS GOOD. SOME CHAPTER ARE SLOW BUT ITS OK. SO WHAT NOW AUTHOR-NIM? STILL ON HIATUS? ILIKE THE NOVEL SO PLEASE CONTINUE. LOL
You scum translate a novel only to 40 chapters and lock any new chapters behind a classist paywall/language wall. You scum don't even provide information for how to find the original novel so a millionaire can fan translate it for personal consumption. You scum love money more than what stories can do for the well-being of Humanity.
MC IS A COWARD, STUPID AND A SHUT -IN NERD. THE STORY DEVELOPMENT IS TOO SLOW I MEAN LITERALLY AFTER HE TRANSMIGRATES THE FIRST THING HE DOES IS TRYING TO RUN EVEN THOUGH HE CLEARLY KNOWS THAT HE IS IN A FAIRLY OVERPOWERED BODY AND THAT RABBIT DEMON IS 2 WHOLE LEVELS LOW IN COMPARISON BUT NOOOOO HE STILL TRIES TO RUN BUT I READ IT SOMEHOW TILL 55+ CHAPTERS AND IT WAS STARTING TO GET BETTER BUT MC WHO REALLY DOESNT KNOW HOW THE CULTIVATION WORLD WORKS ACCEPTED DISCIPLES AND NOT EVEN TRYING THAT ZEALOUS MAKING TECHNIQUES BECAUSE THERE IS STILL DAMN 30% CHANCE THAT THEY MIGHT BETRAY YOU BUT NOOOOOOO YOU HAD TO LEAVE THEM BE GIVE HIM YOUR EXCLUSIVE LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE. AUTHOR:YOU SHOULD ATLEAST TRY TO LEVEL HIS CULTIVATION TO 2 LEVELS HIGHER BEFOR GIVING HIM DISCIPLES AND YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN HIM HIS LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE BECAUSE PERSONALLY I THINK MAIN CHARACTER OF THE STORY SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE A KIND OF UNIQUENESS TO THEIR POWERS. THATS ALL THANK YOU.
A loud sound of glass shattering echoed from the other room, and the man who was seriously working on his laptop computer looked up towards the doorway where the tall oak door creaked open and a tiny slip of a boy came peering inside.
