So I cannot review the translation quality of a story with no chapters but I managed to find the raw and read up to chapter 44. However, based on the fact that he's called "Smith" and not Chen Ling worries me that the translator is going to @#$% this story up like another recent story and try to make him American.
Based on the raws so far :
Story is pretty interesting and bland at the same time. The main character starts off pretty decently, but at a certain point the construction and general effort that goes into his business is left in the hands of others and he becomes a salted fish only responsible for the attributes.
That aside, the attribute business and how that all has been handled so far was very interesting to me. So despite the salted fish of a MC, I'm hoping to see this story released and translated properly.
Fair warning : There may end up being some nationalism/racism in this novel. The dude builds stuff that have attributes, this does not go unnoticed. Foreign countries do seem to be getting involved and the MC does start being overseen in a way by his own government. It's obvious the MC is going to support China. This may be why translators are switching nationalities of MCs when they translate recently, so it'll be Americans being racist and not Chinese.