My Attractiveness Only Affects Divine Beasts - Reviews

What is a Blue Eyes White Dragon doing there? Don’t tell me this is some sort of fan-fiction about a crossover between Yugioh and Pokemon.




Other than that, he has already peaked at 9,999? Pathetic.

I. simply. like. charm. based. powers. because. they. are. always. looked. down. upon.

this is stupid considering that almost all so called "extremely calm and reasonable" protagonist will bend over backwards just for a random pretty girl.

if it has the power to compel an army of protagonists to surrender what more do you need?

Once again, another "I got a super op beast right from the start"

MCs name has been changed to Mike, since WN has been changing tons of trial read names to western-ish names.  For that I give it a low translation rating.

Story development is that he gets maxed out charisma that only works on beasts. That's it. It was satisfying to read about John being eaten alive by bugs, but that's it.
MC is a poor boy with a poor family, and he needs to carry them.
Sounds exactly like that other novel that was on trial reads a few weeks ago where the MC was named "Link". Even the starting is pretty similar.
OP Beast check
poor family check
immediate beast tide to show off beast, check.

There's nothing that particularly stands out, the MC is a bit dumb, I would think that after a failed attempt at asking a girl on a date would make me question the charisma stat.
If anything, if this world is filled with beasts, has he never approached a beast to see if his charisma worked? It only worked when he was choosing a pet? How does that work? How did that dragon sense him from who knows how far away and was attracted to him. Was none of the beasts in the city attracted to him? Big plot hole.

This is somehow worse than 'Era of Beast Taming', at least in that novel the protagonist had to walk 10,000 steps to become legendary Pokemon master. In this story? The protagonist can literally sit on the toilet seat and suddenly, he'll find the Beast God of Time and Space just falling down from the Heavens to become his dutiful, mindless savant.

To top of it all. The protagonist's personality is just amazing. He has about as much EQ as someone raised by wolves - his intelligence is similarly lacking. All in all, this is the type of protagonist that makes you think..."humans can't be that stupid? Can they?"

Raw?

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We know next to nothing about the Character and World Background.
The translation is decent but this novel has the usual "young master" syndrome problem.
Every 1-2 chapter has the usual spectator that needs to say negative comments about the main character just for him to "shine brighter" and the usual face slapping that always appears.

this rating is for translating names into westernized version.

Even if the novel turns out to be a masterpiece I won't read this version of the translation just because of this one point.

This novel is meh, it is below average and the characters are really annoying. MC lacks iq and the writers writing style is kinda meh.

Another waste of time novel.
The more you read the less sense it makes. Don't waste your time on this dumba** novel. There are like 10 novels with the same lame a** copy paste plot,
one worse than each other.

Its another OP Mary Sue character. too much plot armor, gets strong immediately, and I predict no character growth.

I understand he is supposed to be an OP character, but the story isnt structured to compensate for it. With no adversities, what do we have? A novel meant to be a power fantasy of the author.

Even if the story is good, for me the translation and mistakes in writing kills it. Please hire a good editor who knows his job.


Please improve your English

A good start, found it interesting. Then the author got hit on the head by a flying pig. We get Beasts attracted to the MC. Then we get MC becoming a body cultivator. Then we get MC. All the while, losing the Attractiveness System.

It's like playing a MOBA game then suddenly you're playing a Music game, then it changes to a text-based novel game even before completing a level.

The shift in story lore Nd background is very disturbing. Very hard to keep track of what is happening. The author might have been going for Inception style of writing, or something like Dr. Strange. Just doesn't go well in writing.