sorry man, but you should work more on your pacing. The first chapter was great for an opening, but for the next 5 chapters, it was like reading the same thing over and over again.
I should be ashamed of myself for reading this trilogy so fast but... If there is a shred of decency in anyone who reads these they will understand These Were Epic!!! The fact there are printed copies so I can share with my fellow book worms is just the icing on the cake :D
Great cover, first of all, love it. The novel is a pretty fun read as well. System novels are rarely well done but this ones really interesting. Fantastic work on grammar as well. Hope to see more of it in the future :)
Thk for the chapter. Pls update more chapter!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................
I used to live a luxurious life. But, now it is all just a pile of glowing ash. I am all alone I have nothing, no one. Is this what hell feels like? If so, I argue that punishment does not fit my crimes. Wait… a pile of ash. Am I like Merlin now?
"You can't kill him even if you tried training yourself for a century. It was just luck that you accomplished to touch me. You may kill me but you'll not get to any others if that is the case"
