Writing Quality: Not bad but can be better (3)
Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3)
Plot Development: i cant say much bc only 8ch. but i dont understand nothing i think you need to add more text to pre-story or make lore deeper (3)
Character Design: not bad but i cant inmaginate yourself ah MC (3)
Prehistory of the World: sorry for repeat but you need more lore to understand what world it is (3)
Verdict: not bad? but need a lot of work. I didn’t like it yet, I just can’t feel myself in the place of the MC, or at least cheer for it. I don't think I will follow it. but! I can wish the author inspiration and a light hand.
