My Adventures as Lake - Reviews

Of course I'm giving myself five stars. I would say this is the best story ever written, but this is the 2nd novel I've started. So I suppose we will say it tied for first place with my other novel! Haha, in all seriousness please leave reviews with your thoughts guys! Thanks!

from 60 chapter released, this novel is GOLD. and i am very happy that the translation of this novel is done by a great team that delivers quality

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I would GivE this zero stars if i could how is this a story written by a professional writer the speed,grammer,lure,world building,no character build up, nothing its even worst then some fanfics i dont know if the story is this bad because Of the terrible tl but i highly doubt it, The story just feels like a power fantasty written by a 16yr old kid.

It's good enough said.Stuff added for the stupid 140 character thing............................................. ............................................................1..1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2..2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.1.1.1.1.1..11..1.1.1.1.1.1.1.2.2.2.2.

"The menu might look like expensive, but the owner has his reasons to do so, and that's why it's worth it, the only thing missing now is a white robot and a dog.

He started running surprisingly fast.

I want to read full

Dai Mubai coughed in embarrassment and admitted, "It's possible."

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

finbar.           *

I'll just skip the positive and get to the point.There point in the plot that are repetitive which could get quite boring, it's like some of the chapters have half of its contents, give or take, basically describing the same thing over and over again. Fight scenes are also not very descriptive imo.Some phrases are also over used like pinching the bridge of the nose or rubbing the temple.As for the male, while amusing, can sometimes be cringey and annoying. I feel like there's no development with his personality. But perhaps that's point to highlight his mischievous nature. But to me it just gets tiring; it was fun at the start. I would to see him get serious more often.