My 6 Alphas Fan Fiction (COMPLETED) - Reviews

" Fufufu, you must surprise that why I told you guys. Also this is a trust I put to you. I saw what you did to protect your family and from there I wanted to form a good relationship between you and me. " ( Irelia )

Ada seorang pasien yang pergi ke dokter. Dia mengeluh kenapa rambutnya cepat putih.

Until a question popped into Naruto's mind, "Wait, what witch?"

"How about you work under me?" Souta said as he held Fubuki's chin.

Hi I'm the author I thank you all very much for reading this book I am very happy so please continue to read it if not it's okay but I love it if you can add it to the library if it's fine too

I rarely write reviews but this whole story was a massive disappointment. Going into this I thought it would be really good due to the amount of 5 star reviews and the concept of the novel however I was quickly disappointed. There a three main issues that I have with this novel1.  The author has a weird grasp of economics, the way the currency was setup up had problems from the beginning however these could be overlooked until the author decided to start adding USD conversion at which point everything went downhill. For perspective the author claims that maids in the MCs family get paid a relatively high wage of 1 gold a month. However the author later says that 1,000 gold = $10,000 (1 gold = $10) meaning that the maids make less than 1/560 of the average monthly salary in the US. This could maybe make sense if the MC was in a third world country where labor costs were low however the MC is the son of the richest family in the world and obviously does not live in a poor area. I got past this point however and kept reading, however shortly after when the MC introduces chess it is priced at 100 bronze per set which would be $0.001 per set. You can buy ramen in most gas stations for $1 meaning 1 ramen noodles container = 1,000 chess sets. Make it make sense. Again this would maybe be fine if the author didn’t bring up the amount the MC made in USD repeatedly. 2. The MC tries to implement modern social practices that do not make sense in a medieval setting onto this world (e.g. The MC tries to force all the house staff to work a maximum of 8 hours per day and no more, great thought except it makes no sense in a medieval society where work hours are determined by sunrise and sunset) 3. Cringe / Cliche. Everything seems to always work out perfectly for the MC with little to no effort, MC follows reincarnator 101 on steroid template to make money using modern ideas but has an AI that does all the work and creates perfect blueprints. What really irked me though was the MC just straight up giving away the soap recipe to other people because he didn’t want to hurt their business and wanted everyone to live peacefully and happily. Verdict: Had and has potential, author should rewrite what they have an try again. Would not recommend reading until the author makes some edits and fixes some of the biggest issues specifically the currency.

This book had me hooked from the start. The characters feel real, the story flows smoothly, and there’s just the right mix of drama and humor to keep you turning the pages. It’s the kind of book that makes you lose track of time, in the best way. Definitely worth a read!

Wow super great novel love everything about this novel cant wait for more chapters ..................................................................................

Wow! Nice Story line of Journey to Become Shoorveer novel story writing good, and character design great. orJourney to Become Shoorveer is a truly engaging novel that takes readers on an inspiring adventure filled with action, determination, and self-discovery. The story follows the protagonist’s path toward becoming a Shoorveer—a legendary warrior—and the narrative beautifully explores themes of courage, discipline, and resilience. The plot is rich with both inner and outer struggles, showcasing the protagonist's evolution from an ordinary individual to an extraordinary force.The pacing of the story is impressive, keeping readers on the edge of their seats while also providing moments of reflection that deepen the emotional impact of the protagonist's journey. The twists and turns are unexpected yet feel natural within the progression of the narrative. It’s a rollercoaster ride of emotions, filled with intense moments of struggle, victory, and personal growth.One of the standout aspects of Journey to Become Shoorveer is its character design. Each character is carefully crafted, with distinct personalities and motivations. The protagonist is relatable and endearing, with a character arc that feels both organic and inspiring. Supporting characters, whether allies or antagonists, are just as well-developed, contributing meaningfully to the story's emotional depth and the protagonist's growth. The interactions between characters are rich, adding to the authenticity of the relationships and enhancing the overall experience.