Multiverse & Memories Of Monkey D Luffy (Hiatus) - Reviews

Aaron is a cool character. Love the way this was more of a psychological story rather than the run-of-the-mill stories that normally are on here.

damn a continuation huh...i ddnt even finish the first one yetbut the more chapters this one has...the better.stack them up, stack them up.

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The story is pretty decent with its's unique slice of life like beginning that is quite refreshing as it's not filled with drama, much to my liking. The pacing of the story is pretty good too. The farming and family like structure is pretty refreshing to read with a FL alongside the premise of a conspiracy running in the background.The writing quality like punctuations and spacing needs a little improvement but the rest is fine.

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"Nasuverse system."

Satan walked into the lobby, heading straight for the receptionist's desk straight ahead of him. She looked busy, and ignored him while he stood there awkwardly waiting for her to acknowledge his presence. While he waited, he took a look around.

It also let out poisonous webs towards Tang san, forcing him to use his spirit, forming a wall of vines in front of him to block it. Only now did he notice that this Spider emperor was actually a variation and had 12 legs instead of the usual eight.

She has her own reasons though.

This absolute POS site. I can not not see my 1-star review that should stand in second place, unless I'm logged in with this account. Any other account hides that. I've looked deeper and as it turns out this mfking site hide 1-star reviews that reach top. fk you webnovel, fk you.

The plot is very interesting and the World Background is very good. Stability of updates is equally good.  Character Design is good in respect of the 3-4 characters I have come across up to the 5th chapter.A few more dialogues in each chapter is what people had advised me and I am passing on the same here as well as shorter paragraphs.Writing quality is good a few typos and mixing of tenses which do not disturb the flow of the story.All the best.

All I can ask is: Where was this story back when I was desperately looking for something like it? I remember searching for a book exactly like this back when I was a pure reader. There was simply not enough WELL-WRITTEN babies-in-apocalypse stories in the world! Thank you for writing this.I'm still early in the story, but it's obviously going to be a banger. Anyway, knowing Fairy and her large portfolio of great stories, I'm pretty sure this would be awesome too.Good job Fairy~