Multi-Space Adventurer [LitRPG] - Reviews

So if you've not looked at the tag and clicked on Hollywood one you should. This story is posted on Oct 30.....another story which is LITERALLY the same exact one almost except a few minor background details was posted weeks earlier....so either this dude is that author too or well he just copied and pasted and change some background and name details....I read the other one first and 13 chapters in this one is same basically so far including the time in history it starts, movies and child author.....

these book is one of the best in a while .

Author here, Thank you for reading. I am trying to integrate "plague inc" mechanics with cultivation because I haven't read or seen any stories like that. I hope you enjoy this new change of pace in the cultivation genre. If you have any enquiries or suggestions, you can list them here. I will reply to every single one.

It’s a mildly interesting concept, it isn’t anything groundbreaking but it’s kinda entertaining. The grammar is horrible and is what made me choose to drop the novel. If the story and the development of characters was better I could read around the grammar but it didn’t engage me enough to even try.

As a person who’s never read a BlackFlamer wn, here’s my review:Writing Quality: absolutely perfect, no grammatical errors.Updating Stability: Great so far, but there’s like no chapters out rn so I won’t comment on thatStory Development: Only a few chapters out but pacing’s been perfectChara Design: Good so far, characters seem more than one-dimensional but there’s not enough chapters to talk about that kekWorld Background: Not enough chapters for that, but it seems like there’s something, and that something’s pretty goodOverall, 4.4 from me

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My only reason for not liking it is Mc is dumb beyond reason ??

i don't have any right regard the novel

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