Mr. Jones' spoiled wife - Reviews

Deploying the troops to get that hot man Michael

Due to very poor update stability it doesn't deserve a good review. It even has privilege packages up to 20 chapters although author sometimes does not update any chapter for more than one month.

The mc is good and not stupid or arrogant, the "cheat" need him to work for the rewards and the world background isn't really original but it's really hard because a lot have already been used before.But the author like to repeat himself a lot and it's a little annoying so only 4stars.

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Not bad..pace abit slow and no other exceptional cheats

Yeah I'm rating for myself, if I don't do it first who will? Anyway, I appreciate anyone who reads this, even if you quit at chapter one it's still one extra read for me, still, I would appreciate you more if you read all the chapters though.As is said in the overview, I aim to have characters with their own personalities and goals, an immersive world and hopefully a good romance subplot (which will probably take me a while, I quite like slow burn).If you would ever so kindly leave your own reviews and critiques it would be very helpful, so thank you in advance.

although the character is almost similar to every character from other novel (pampered  still who don't want to be pampered

He decided to think about that when he meets with the old Kira and the Lechys.

"Kawish" SFX for the ball hitting nothing but net

• [Artifact 1/???]

My thoughts were interrupted by the door at the top of the stairs open. I struggled to pull against the chains in hopes that they would break. "Tic, tic tic," David said shaking his finger. "We're not trying to escape? now, are we love?" He said the last part between gridded teeth. His hand shot out toward my face. He grabbed it forcefully making me look into his cold unforgiving ice blue eyes.

"Mu Zheng....."