Mother in the apocalypse - Reviews

I like the story a lot.  The characters are well designed for the most part and the plot has steady progress.  I would recommend this novel.

Great story, my only issue is that the author seems to be pushing himself to create a suspense filled story instead of relaxing and taking it slow. I hope this gets continued.

I can accept that it makes no sense for a Navy SEAL to be working in the FBI for retirement money. I can accept that the MC doesn’t doubt the system which came out of no where even a little. I can accept the inaccurate descriptions of the USA and the sterotypical misogynistic depiction of female characters in the few chapters that I have read. I can accept using catties over kilograms and using weight to measure the amount of money in a bag. But live-streaming an FBI “drill” and turning a bank robber into a celebrity? What the f***. Mtling is one thing but this plot is like something out of a middle school kid’s imagination, completely unrealistic and full of holes. Even for a fictional story this is just too much. I would actually like to give this a one star review, but since it’s at least readable in English and it’s a trial read, I won’t t give a one star to the translation and release rate categories.

Just a correction: Ik it says its 5 chaps/week right now, but we r actually releasing 5 per day for the first week and at least 2 per day after that. The 5chap/week was just the default and QI forgot to change it. Also for the odd paragraphs, there's something wrong with the QI translator/editor platform that's just adding new paragraphs everywhere. I will try my best to fix it and in the mean time, plz bare with us

Alternate Beast times blah blah face slapping always ends up turning stupid…. But I like the cool house so I’ll give it a chance let’s hope it gets better.                                       

now we need this translation to start too, just like lord of the oasis, we need this too, I know for a fact this is a very very good novel, a .erg enjoyable novel, something new

It is perfect and hidden piece of gem.... Tho the only caveat is the fact that every person he meets is another genius.Also MC is a bit too forgiving, gets punished for something he did not do but forgives them not to forward his personnel motives but cause of a little girl who could not even speak to defend him..... You can't just be altruistic always, but must give a read to it.

Patiko, nors pasaulio įpatybiu daug nematėme bet istorija kuri pateikta savo vaga išpildo. Veikėjai nelabai turėjo galimybę atsiskleisti, tai gal vienintelis neigiamas atsiliepimas apie šią trumpa istorija.

Ace "ignored her i like to sell the red long sword  and i like some juice"

After some time

"AAAAAARRRGGGHHH"

so umm about yesterday let's not mention that again what did we do yesterday Devon xavion said. you don't remember what we did yesterday. the only thing I remember is going to the bar....      dang my head hurts so much and why am I in your house Devon. so  you don't remember what happen. soooo can you tell me  why there are scars on you back??? oh that , I fell on some glass again. again?!!? why do you keep falling a damn glass dude are you that clumsy. I guess so OK xavion the only way you can live here is.. you have to be my maid all day and all night you will.go every where with me for the next 5 years that b sounds good right. hmm okay but you have to feed me with your own money ok.