MOONBOUND: Love, War and Destiny - Reviews

Nice story. Waiting for next chapters

The MC has as much personality as stale bread. The typical filial shtick with the annoying mentality of 'returning a droplet of kindness with a waterfall'. This MC has no individuality, nothing to distinguish him from the 100,000 other MCs with the exact same personality. If that wasn't enough the translation quality is terrible. The quality noticeably drops every 5 chapters. For instance, some words are directly translated into English without considering the context. This is why this novel calls cultivators as 'fairies'. Obviously rushed!Honestly, I have no clue how this rubbish was picked. The story is awful, character design is bland, and the translation quality is reminiscent of machine translation.

B O R I N GA boring power up story that wastes it's original premise. I was expecting unique strategies or usage of the top up system, but nope it shows up whenever the author feels like boosting the MC. Translation is spotty and reads like an engineering report: "Went there, did that, got rewards"MC has no personality or development and is pretty much an emotionless robot. side characters are generic cardboard cutouts of "this is villain

It's cool in a very unique way. The novel has a great potential and it was such a good read. The ML left such a great and lasting impression on me .Great job author!

'Eh? I didn't even put much into the first one? Is she faking it?' He tested it by using no mana on the next hit. There was no way this hit would even hurt a toddler.

When it was done cleaning the mortar and pestle, the rabbit placed it on the ground. It rummaged through its fur coat to pull out a block of something that looked like vegetable root. The Jade Rabbit sniffed at it and nodded satisfactorily before dropping it into the mortar. Then it started to get to work.

"Hold still for a moment. Let me examine you." Audrey grabs my head and a holographic display of my brain pops out. A portion of the brain is red. The closer to the center of the red, the redder it is. "Ah, I see. This is why you don't remember. Let's fix you up then." She pinches the red zone and pulls it out, then throws it into the fire. A flurry of memories rush past. I remember first meeting Selina and her family. The three day fight I had with the DreamStalker guy defending Selina's unprotected comatose consciousness. Man I wish comatose people could remembered their visit to Dreamia. That fight was epic. Then I realized it. I fell in love with another woman.

The building has a green logo with a mermaid on the top of it and there is also a sign saying "Welcome to the Starbucks."

" What !? Why need to go that far from it !? " ( Daphia )

see it's a little bias no doubt but read first couple chapters and i freaking fell in love with it....i sense so much potential with the writing, mins you writing not the story cuz a good writing can make any story fabulous so bring optimistic I am hoping the author will deliver a good novel.

As someone who really like Mythology, and Fate Franchise, I really like how this story is planning out. However the first few chapters was bit slow but then it quickly speed up. the small introduction of the God and Goddess are nice as well. it make me want to know more about them. It had great idea but would need improvement in writing

I mean reading the synopsis alone peaked at my interest..The book cover is spooky and adventurous.. can't wait to find out what's in it for me.. ?