Moonborn: The Lost Legacy - Reviews

Moonborn: The Lost Legacy
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I love this author. She updates regularly and the details bring the story to life. My only complaint is no transition between storylines. Most authors use a dash or something to make readers aware of character/story changes. It causes slight confusion at times, but not enough to ruin the story.
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Finally, I finished it. Ok, so here's my review. I come here to read this novel because I like This author's other novel, "I will kill the Author" a lot and I heard that this novel's Protagonist is the main villain of that novel. But you know it's totally worth my time. He ll, Only last chap is enough to make it worth it. It will definitely be in my top 10 novel list. In the first 20 chap, MC is simple, and in Starting chapters Author uses the lol word in conservation a lot but after that, he gets better and the Author stops using lol. After the first few chaps the story, writing, and grammar will get better and better. Although the last few chaps namely 120 to 135 are a bit boring and confusing. But the Author improves a lot as the story goes on and stops giving those cringe names... At least He tried. Definitely one of the top authors on this App. You can tell how much I like it from I complete this in 2 days... 2 nights to be more accurate.But I have a Que here to Author. [Spoiler]Why didn't StarSuper destroy That Dragon fossil?? They have two things to protect, Fossil and a life branch. He can't destroy the latter for obvious reasons but if he destroyed the fossils he could focus solely on defending that live branch and stop Sam from another power-up and might be able to defeat him. Don't tell me he couldn't become for god's sake he can destroy a moon and there are some abilities that can literally reduce those fossils to atoms. Wow, I usually don't like writing reviews but I couldn't stop myself from writing this. Good job. ??
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this is a really good one I hope the translator continues. is there any other source with similar quality where I can read this novel?
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The book is so amaizing everything about it is well structured.I've only read 9 chapters but i'm already so absorbed in it .keep up the good work
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In 1991 (starting of movie) 65 million movies are high budget. If a dumb fucker dump the box office of a big budget movie no studio will cast it even a  supporting actor and this is not even his first failure. I don't no China will cast but I an sure even if your father is Francis's Coppola no studio will cast you for a lead and if you have no connection like Coppola at least major and medium studio will definitely ban you.
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It is just the backbone which would make the story and not realley a novel for me.It has a lot of intresting ideas.It is not fleshed out.
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This story has good world-building and amazing plot! I would totally recommend it to anyone who likes fiction and cultivation! Thank you author for such an astounding story!
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I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
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"The reason why he walks like that is probably because he hurt his back which made him walk like that?" June felt a little bad for Keres but got happy when she thought of the possibility that he was around her age. Don continued to be in deep thought.
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