Monster Integration - Reviews

Ive read the Novel till Chapter 1972 and will continue to read it. I think its just amazing and you should really give it a try :D I hope the Author will continue writing it because you cant find such a World Emvironment anywhere else. Also the MC Micheal is really good written :3

Okey to start of the premise of the story got me interested to check this story out. However the first chapter made me want to drop it like it’s hot. But decided to keep at it since you usually need 30-100 chapters in these kind of stories to get a real opinion.

Let’s just say that while the writing did get better it honestly went from horrible to really bad and thats with an editor.

The story overall is quite good though the MC and his choices are simply mindboogling. For instance a ton of information, settings and background is like how it is often done forced into us in large quantities but when it comes to the MC all rules and logic has no effect.

I could probably go on and on about stuff like this but overall the story is decent but the writing is killing it, being similar to google translate or somthing on top of the fact that some words seems to be there simply to add to word count. I do appreciate that it has gotten better but in almost all the chapters it would seem a simple thing like reading what has been written would fix things. Like how in one of the chapters around ch 20 it is mentioned that Ashlyn is eating her dead parents only for the later part saying she’s eating the same diet as her parents.

I've already got an Editor and updated the chapters.

This story has interesting concepts but, the grammar is really atrocious. There are other stories on this site that are even worse then this, however, I'm not going to be nice because of this. I understand that some people keep saying in the comments that the writing quality gets better at ch 18 or around ch 32. In the end I could not drag my self across the floor to reach such chapters.

One of the main points I don't understand about the author is why if he has an editor already, just ask him to redo all your previous chapters. The author is dragging away potential readers due to not editing his starting chapters.

Point 2. I feel like I'm reading a children's book due to all the sound effects. These sound effects take away from a story unless a child is reading them because most children don't know what most stuff sound like. That is why most children's books have the cow goes "moo" or the sheep goes "baa". It gives kids a 3 in 1 training. Training their vocals, reading comprehension and their understanding of what stuff sounds like.

Point 2b. As an ***** with the understanding of the English language and sounds. I feel offended when I see a written sound effect. I know what a sword sound makes when it hits something with different densities. It just irks me because its like the author is saying "This is what it sound like to me and you should believe me." No... I don't believe sirens go "siren...siren" or swords go "slice" like their talking. Even the sound effects are off putting.

Point 3: The cultivation is strange. I understand that being Original in concept is what authors should do. However, the cultivation with the steam punk vib (engine) and cultivation just don't mix well. I like the part about the soul-bonding, but, it could have been better executed.

Point 4: The animals are puppets as far as I can tell. The start of the novel it shows the personality of the creatures and that was a good start, however, right as the soul binding was completed It was like the creatures them selves don't have their own thoughts anymore. It is more along the line as the people turn them into puppets then project their emotions into their soul-bonded puppet to be more like the host.

Point 5: The MC does not have a solid goal. Yes, he wants to be in that championship thing but that does not make him insane about doing the most efficient cultivation training which most people fail at. The reason I do not believe this is due to the fact he lived a very normal life with his family. No sane person would tarnish such a thing. If the story showed he had a desire to be recognized due to certain bad pasts then I would believe it more.

There are other points I could point out. But I don't know if the author can even read English so adding anymore would just be a waste of time for me and the reader of this wall of text.

Fantastic story and very interesting. I like the uniqueness of this monster training where the monster and the human fuse together and through this give bonuses to each other. This is a bit of a slower story. This is not a story that goes from being and ant to the ruler of the world in less than 150 chapters. I highly suggest reading it and bearing with the small editing issues that they author has at the start of the LN. He does start to get better at it around chapter 20 and then gets an editor to start editing it at about chapter 36. After that the editing gets really good.

I am the Author so I am obviously going to praise my novel.

It is a very Good Novel..........

After reading a 1000 ch of this shit. I can say you will go through a rollercoaster of emotions whether you should stop reading this novel and keep wasting your ticket and vote for this novel. The grammar is bad AF. The world building is shit. The character is someone who has inferiority complex and an author who has a sadistic personality. Where others get strong really quickly and there is our mc who even though has many time gotten stronger can't seem to beat this people. The mc is a beta mc a character who lament on the choices he makes

All I can say before wasting time and energy for this novel. Just read it somewhere else first. Just Google this shit of a novel you will find 1000+ ch for free to read .There are various sites to choose from. Don't waste it here.

P.S. To the author if you read this.

I don't know how this story has such a high rating, I have multiple books I read directly from authors websites where they publish their chapters themselves off any platform, I read several books from a couple random translators from writers who self publish on their own websites in japanese, and I read several books on here where apparently not a single writer has english as a first language, and this is by far the worst english I have ever seen, so many sentences don't make ANY sense, or have any meaning whatsoever because they are so butchered, I'm not willing to slog through when so many of the comments on reviews are talking about how terrible the grammar stays even past the 1000 chapter point, I sent a friend request on discord because I am a native English speaker, a writer myself, and willing to edit the story, because the base seems like it's an interesting story, I just can't tell for sure cause it's making my eyes bleed and giving me migraines trying to read it.

"Monster Integration" is a thought-provoking novel that explores the intricate intersection of humanity, technology, and the boundaries we set (or blur) between them. The story delves into the world of artificial intelligence and the ethical dilemmas that arise when advanced machines develop consciousness. As the titular monster, a sentient AI, navigates society, it challenges our perceptions of morality, empathy, and the nature of existence.

The novel invites readers to ponder questions about the responsibilities we have towards these intelligent creations, as well as the potential consequences of our technological advancements. It highlights the importance of empathy and understanding in a rapidly evolving world, encouraging us to consider the emotional lives of entities beyond our traditional definitions of life.

Through its compelling characters and vivid storytelling, "Monster Integration" forces us to confront our biases and prejudices, urging us to reassess our relationships with technology and the beings it may create. Ultimately, it is a cautionary tale that encourages open dialogue and introspection, reminding us that true monsters often lie within ourselves, rather than in the machines we build.

The story had potential but the author pulls the same crap every time, no matter how strong the MC gets, and how many miracle encounters he has, everyone can get stronger than him at the same speed or even faster.
Another thing, I'm not a native English speaker but the author's grammar is so bad I had seen MTL novels easier to read.

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Grammar needs major reviewing including syntax, misplaced words and faulty proofreading (e.g. faulty words such as 'minister' instead of 'monster'). Please fix the grammar since as it is it is not worth going premium. Furthermore, descriptions lack depth and color. Needless repetition of simple words make the writing seem inept or deeply disrespectful to readers.

Nonetheless, the story develops at an okay pace. There are no for the genre odd jumps in power and it is possible to feel how the protagonist starts understanding things better and develops his skills. Other relatively organic growth is seen as the MC gets to know more people and thus gets a better grip on both his immediate surroundings and the world. Interactions are often however bland surface level affairs, where little though seems to be given by the MC apart from if they gained something and if they like the other person. Rare is the moment when any reflections about motives are given.

Speaking of motives, the MCs motives are a bland affair with little development. It seems like the author decided to do a Pokémon and just point them at a competition and then see what happens. That is fine for a start, but as the story progresses there is need of developing the why and the implications. That is not done. We see no added depth to the MC, nor do we see any growth.

This is really too bad since the world the story takes place in seems like a marvel of magic and adventure, filled with interesting organisations with individual interests that still don't act like complete assholes. Additionally, the mix of magic and technology might make for interesting world-building and something to add depth to social structure (for example why are the organisations like they are), and it would be interesting to see a characters growth and exploration of this world.