Monarch of Gluttony: System of Sin - Reviews

I think the MC is an idiot of some kind.

Don't judge first read it.

I don't know about later but it feels like the MC is a 12 to 13-year-old kid.

Too much extra talking, too much drama, No hard work is done here.

He has only suffered in the first chapter, there was no mention of him trying to learn anything.

He is just lucky for no reason.

He is still a kid after suffering, as it is said Maturity comes with suffering too.

He was too hasty in his decision-making.

I don't get it how can a regressor be an idiot?

There is no information on Floor 0 or where the commoners are staying is it Earth or is it that earth is destroyed?

Too little information before the boss fight!

Thanks for reading the review, I hope you think about it.

Have a good day

So far, and 80 chapters are not that much, this novel is one of the best on webnovel.
Decent to good grammar, a nice world building, good story telling, character progression, and a lot happening but not too much.
Nice pace, too.
A hidden gem I would say :)

First of all, I'm not a fan of harem so  I'm gonna dropped this when women become stupid after falling in love in the MC and I hate the cliche of hero saves the beauty troupe!!!,and I hope it's not gonna like that cause you know many great novels and especially the novel I like to read get ruined because of it. yeah, I kinda have a prejudice about harem novels, so I'm hoping that it's not gonna be like that because it has the potential to be a great novel for me, and it's pretty unique cause I found it hard to come across a novel with tower setting. feel free to recommend to me a novel with the tower setting! for now, I'm enjoying reading this while skipping some parts where women are mentioned.

The book just started and I can already tell this is gonna be a fun read. I know it’s a bit premature to write a review when only a single chapter has been uploaded but I’m gonna do it anyway.

Nothing more to say really, I’ll write a new review later on when more chapters are written.

Not too good.
I dont like mc, he is not smart and his decisions sometimes make me cringe.
Comedy aspect is lacking.
I didnt connect to the characeters

here and I give review better compare to 1 star and this is the real review.




this story is bad after reading into 1st chapter. the one thing I hate about mc is her personality. even though I read at 1wt chapter I know where the story will went well. Just read at first chapter. And the world background is quite bad because the author did Chinese novel and Korean novel a cultivation world with technology and a tower! it's exactly what you think so yeah
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I have to say, the first chapter was well written. I also do like the concept of a sin system, it's very unique. I can say that , from the first chapter and the unique concept, this novel has a lot of potential. You've got my interest, so wil keep an eye out for further chapters.

1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wandering why you are still reading this
8. You saw that mistake, right?
(On 7)
10. But did you see that I skipped 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9
12. I said "saw you" not you saw
13. I also skipped 2
14. You got tricked
15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!


cedit- owner
you that read rong

BRoo author this is some good shii but wryyyyyy it was free 2 days ago now i have to pay to read the rest of the chapters bro wryyy im broke rn

This novel has a lot of potential and I hope it will not be dropped. The book also has a unique tower + seven sins team with there still being many things to add about the world and Mysteries to be uncovered. It's truly packed with many possibilities.

good story, good grammar


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This is an amazing book. Word count below, don't read it.






We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy 
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand
  Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you 
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it
Inside, we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it 
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see  Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you       
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you          
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you 
(Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) 
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it
Inside, we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it 
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand 
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you                   Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you         
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you