Modern World Magical Marionette - Reviews

It's already being translated under the name of God of Life but the translation isn't the best.                                            

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Great potential, the start of a progressive story, and experience. The MC starts as many of us (neets) and goes the extra mile into a place that can change the minds of the players. I predict him to participate and change while doing so.

It has an interesting storyline. The plot was very intriguing. The story pulls the readers to read more of it. The story's progress was well-paced, and the placement was comprehensible. The characterization was also relatively good, but it gets shaky during conversations. However, the lack of details to descriptions was making it a little confusing at times. There are few grammatical and punctuation errors that need to be revised and edited. Even if the story was successfully conveyed to the readers, I think that it would be best to work on those issues because I believe that this story has great potential and could be better.No offense meant to the author, and I wish you the best of luck!

The Story is clear and very enjoyable. The reason i gave one off is because the MC is written with hesitation but otherwise its a wonderful story! I recommend a read.

This book has an interesting plot setting with decent potential. However what detracts from the story is the poor grammar, diction and character development. It feels like the story was written by a school kid.

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"You're a virgin too?" I asked him causing him to stop. "Of course I am. I don't fuck dirty women. I just play with them. Making out is my farthest. But now it'll go farther.

" kita udah sampai tuh" kata Om Danil ketika mobil berhenti di depan pintu gerbang

"Awww... no no... I will kill him" she replied.