Better? Are you sure? I read My Vampire System up to ch 600 something, and I given up, because its not any better. Yes, its somehow decent up to ch 300 or so, but after that its goes downhill, and after ch 600 its a pure... garbage.
Doesn’t read well. Every paragraph is a run on sentence. So many grammatical errors that it’s distracting. Interesting story line but needs a lot of editing
