Mistaken Husband After Blindness - Reviews

the cover is awesome lol....................................................................................................................

Note: I only read 4 chapters.It felt like I was watching a case study in my crim course. The protagonist was chilling to read about, not because descriptions were detailed but due to his reckless decisions and lack of stress in the moment of crime.Despite being written in first person there are actually a lot of points that go unexplained. Decisions are told to the reader then acted upon, not really elaborated on further. It’s a missed chance to get to know the protagonist’s thought process more.Contrary to my previous comment, I think the author has fallen into a trap that you can easily fall into when you write in first person—telling rather than showing. The beginning of the prologue is a good example, there are clearly a lot of emotions but it’s mostly being expressed though monologue. It ends up looking like a rant someone tweeted rather than words in a novel. Describing using literary devices like similies and metaphors can go a long way.Grammar wasn’t terrible, just missed some capitalization of words after the end of a dialogue and a few contradicting use of tenses. At one point there was a section that written in past, present, then past again even though it was referring to the same period in time. I wish you the best on the rest of the novel, Author!

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Such a disapointing Novel. The concept and the story is really awesome and i really liked it at first. However, around chapter 500 the racism, nationalism and the fact he keeps bullying women made it too hard for me and i dropped it. Retard MC, and racism i know it is something the author wants but damn, all the humor in the world would not make me bear it. I'm european and i still hate it how korean and japan are discribed. those who can, Enjoy

The only good thing about this novel is it comedy everything else is trash

This is a really good book to past the time while this corona thing goes around. I hope you like it as much as i did but if you dont please dont be rude about it. Thxs

It's a bit early to tell the direction of the story. I'll cover the things so far. Writing quality is decent and has improved from the 1st chp. It's easy enough to read. No off putting errors or anything. But it can definitely be better and made more engrossing. As for the story, I wouldn't say there are no clichés but things are resolved quickly and it doesn't drag down the story. Like I said before, it is still early but there's lots of potential to make an interesting story. This is something I hope the author focuses on. Developing important characters not just the MC. I also feel that mc jumped the gun too quickly in the killing the entire family, he doesn't have a strong reason to kill the innocents as well or even torture the family head. His father's situation wasn't right, but the mc's retaliation was too much too quickly. Not enough development for that sort of thing. Objectively the family considered his father easily replaceable, only a few were directly responsible for their suffering. Author could still fix that playing on MC being inexperienced and hot-headed back then because frankly since the mc isn't insane there isn't enough development to make him so cold and ruthless from the get go. World background is slowly being built, I hope it's done intricately and interestingly.

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" So why did you still want to be stronger?"

Which somehow resounded throughout the forest. Damn laws of physics, why'd you have to f*ck me over right now?!

"Ah… yes. It's my apologies for… forgetting to tell you that… the Entrance Exam is less than a week from now." The rodent laughed awkwardly, seemingly scratching the back of his head. "Wait," He paused, "I actually didn't forget to tell you—neither Aizawa nor I hasn't been able to get in touch with you for a while now. Where the heck are you?"