This is just really strange. It was hard getting into the story because it just doesn't make sense. The guy liked "building" things, which is fine. Unfortunately, he asks for a skill that lets him create anything. Right from the start, it's not building anymore. It's simply thinking of something, and it suddenly is there. In the first couple of chapters, he finds a little girl, takes her back to her village that was being attacked (taking a child back to potential danger), and waltzes into the village without a care and without the reader even knowing his thought process. The guy simply does it. Then, the villagers trust him without any real wariness shown except for the fact that the author stated that they were wary. He uses his "building" skill, talking all boisterous as if he has any real reason to feel pride or anything and moves on as if it's nothing. The story makes no sense, even at the start, which is the most important. The character is just overall quite strange already. The only real positive is the grammar and overall legibility of the story. You don't have to take my word for it, though. Just read the first couple of chapters. I also know the main thing people will say is, "You didn't give the story a chance," but the start is incredibly important. This start was rushed and genuinely just messy. Giving yourself multiple 5-star reviews is also just strange behavior. Take my review as you wish, if it's even left here.
