As of now, the story is well written from a grammatical point of view. But we have 30 chapters in which we see an exponential development of harem and not the business empire. And here I have a question, his women can leave their previous husbands because they are not satisfied, then with the increasing numbers in the harem, how many women will remain at the end? Because if the protagonist doesn't have control over time itself, it is impossible to physically satisfy all his women with the rate of expansion of one new woman every 3 chapter. Besides, the title of this work is "Merchant Emperor", but until now the business component was less than a whole chapter, moreover the final objective of the project is still the expansion of the harem. In the end, we will see, after the protagonist rise in power, a law to expells all non-eunuch from the city, so his women can live with some space.
