Mella & Rufian - Reviews

It lacks in both character development and update stability.

I'm not going to be an shameless author, but I think I did good with this. So I hope whoever reads this enjoys it, and if you don't tell me what I did wrong so I can fix it.

It's a good book. I like the fact that the power doesn't change but the mc has to think of ways to use it effectively. The characters tho they feel 2d dimensional most of the time but there are good bases for good character writing here. World background is something I am more interested in it's very subtle but it's working I guess.

Read the first few chapters and liked it but the story but the multiple POV is not to my liking. Single, third party POV would have been better.

Dear readers, hello. I am now resuming the updates for this book. Before that, I have made some adjustments and modifications to parts of the plot. The specific changes are as follows:1. The level of the pact between Alexander and Laura has been changed from 200 to 1000.2. The form of the Turkey has been adjusted from a dragon to a thunderbird.3. The name of the top structure in the City of Hope has been changed.4. Alexander additionally acquires a pair of very powerful eyes.5. Karu forges a sword for Alexander, but only completes half of it.6. Some character names have been adjusted and unified.7. Clichés have been removed to make the reading more fluid.

Jungkook eyed his lover with concern, before he sat down beside him on his hospital bed and placed an arm around his shoulders.

Limbs bent the opposite way.

New players are given three Life Stones each in-game day until they reach level 10 or somehow receives an Elite-Grade equipment. After that, every players are only given one Life Stone every 24 in-game hours[6] that they're online. As if to pour salt on a wound, these Life Stones are soul-bound, untradeable, isn't for sale even for real money[7] and expires in 96 in-game hours including the time when the players aren't online. Some players could play and never keep a Life Stone in any one time. Indeed the lack of Life Stones would certainly make anyone, especially someone like a guild master hesitate to do any kind of Deathmatch[8].

Impressive, her magic seems to be quite versatile. It can go from defense to offense quite easily. If done right, maybe she can also use it to lock others with it too.

this is not a shameless review, this is a genuine author review at Chapter 75. but I'm still shameless, you'll find out if you read.That said, what should you expect from this book?what are the pros and cons?mc hates humans, the hate will grow as time goes on. He's not your normal hero... Have that in mind.the beginning of the book is terribly slow paced.... Humor was used to replace the action.unstable character of the mc, it's a shift, that is because. MC lost his touch with humans and his trying to cooperate with them, spends more time in his mind.Side characters don't have much depths, i'on even know hoe myself, don't ask me, I tried. I just saw it that way..... It changes along the way.Let's just say, I'm not the best at writing peak stories.The story just gets better as you read. Besides, it's my first good book.All I can say Is, my current readers are just patient, and sure they'll get a huge chunk of the meat and bone!If you feel like your're patient enough to join them, fine you can test you patience, but it all depends on you.I'm just grateful I have good readers despite how bad I am at this...Thank you for reading this far!

Author here, hopefully answering some questions that you may have before starting the story.firstly, I should mention that I come from a background of reading traditional fantasy books and mangas, so I may be unaware of some of the common tropes that are present in webnovels. I'm not sure whether this is important information for the readers to know, but I think it might give clarity on some things.What you can expect from this story is hopefully a mixture of everything, though I'd say my main plans have been centered around character work, world building and action.I've seen many readers ask authors if the main character will be overpowered, I wouldn't like to spoil what I have planned, but the main character is definitely intelligent and unique within his world.I plan on updating the story with at least one or more chapters a day, as it's an enjoyable story to write :)if you have any questions you'd like to ask, feel free to comment, as well as give your thoughts. Regardless of whether they are positive or negative.

as follow indian, i related this story, But I like adventure in astra more, as I more of a pervert. Anyway, this is free review, hope you successed.