Meireisaretatensei: A second chance in another world - Reviews

Finally finished this work... (Which is it is written till now) and I'm glad that I did. This review is from a reader who has read all the chapters currently available. And people who are looking for an awesome book to latch and get addicted to, this is the one!!. A very well-planned and executed work with a touch of professionalism. There's no major errors in the story at any time. Thank you author and please continue this book with the same quality and pace!!!

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A very good novel. The plot is better than all the Chinese novels we have seen lately. MC is basically "All for One" in "The Boys"/"My Hero Academia" world. Would love to see the novel get picked up.

This is a novel worth reading, and I personally am the kind who don't like romance but this novel.It puts romance nicely and in a limit, and the limit and pace is so good that you never even think their was romance even once in the novel yet their is.I had literally read the whole novel in about 10 hours.This is probably the second or third book that I had had an interest in do much....Go read it...

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Writing : Overall, the writing is quite good.  There are a frequent errors in the sentence structure, but they don't heavily impact the flow of the story. It would be nice to see a larger variety in the verbiage used, but overall it's good.Story Developement : The story developement is better then a majority of novels on this site. It is slightly faster then a normal book, but not as rapid as other novels. Progression is clear, although he doesn't face many challenges up until chapter 50. He also doesn't try to build up his relationships with people, yet it just works out for him.Character Design : The character design is average. It isn't too descriptive, but it gives just enough so you can have a general idea of what a character looks like.Update Stability : No clue.World Background : World background is less thought out then I'd like. We have no clue how many vampires there are, other species, or even if there are various continents. The weather is always the same, and we have no clue what the castle, town, or his room look like. It's the biggest problem with this book.Overall, the story concept and writing is great, the pacing is good, but the world background needs major improvement. Rating : 3.2/5

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After a while Touma left the Hyuga compound remembering his training with Jiraiya while promising the three that he'll visit again.

He looked up, facing the old lion king again. "That reminds me- Senior!" The old lion looked down on him, waiting for him to continue. Sheng Feilong jumped to his feet, looking at the old lion with a serious expression and took a deep breath. "Senior, I wish to ask you something... You know that my Master, Song Weihan, creates Artificial Soul Bones,  right?"

"W..Wait!! Don't go ahead!!!" Kuro suddenly shouted with concern at the skipping Akari who was already quite a way in front of him now. But it was too late. Akari once again suddenly stopped in her tracks right infront of the exit. Her singing stopping along with all other movement. Kuro chased after her at a moderately fast pace; but what was the point now, she had already seen it, whether she was mentally prepared or not didn't matter anymore. Kuro slowed down as he neared her, and eventually stood by her side.

Alex who heard the man yell, crouched down fast as sweat started to drop from his forehead as his heartbeat got faster by the minute.

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