Master, I Swear I Never Wanted to Be a Traitor! - Reviews

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The narrative style is different but well written with clear ideas. The childhood nostalgia and the essence of family and values was well portrayed. The effects of loss and grief and the understanding and support from the family and friends were really heartwarming.But there are many instances of tense switches and missing punctuation marks. And I suggest breaking your paragraphs into smaller chunks which will make it easy to read and digest.All in all, a book with great potential. A bit of editing and polishing will definitely make it shine.All the best

Good read the script is broken down to finest detail this is a highly recommended.Author please never stop writing.I look forward to finishing this.

Great novel. Only issue is doesn’t have enough chapter releases, which us odd conaidering how much potential and its already a great novel.

After waiting until what seemed to be 7 am, that blue screen appeared.

(Jun's eyes sparkle again)

Sakura slumps and goes to the shopping center. Me and Naruto head over to my house and then we begin the meeting with him holding out his fist. I chuckle and hold mine out. Immediately we are in Naruto's Mindscape.

Bowet – saya mau pesan bret jambreeet

The Eevee was a different color then any Eevee in Pokémon. This Eevee was red and the tips of its tail, it's underbelly, and the tips of its paws were black. The Eevee smiled at me and I took it in.

At the beginning the story was interesting, but in my opinion at around chapter 100 the story development is to slow. The main character wants to reach a new city, altough he runs with Mach 1 he needs a long time, because of too many side storys

Goood.....................................................