From what I see the stability of the updates is nice - not that I look at that normally, as I know myself that sometimes it's difficult to write and post all the time ^^
I like the language used here - not too fancy, but not too basic. Perfect in-between so that even people who aren't native to English may enjoy the story without getting confused.
As for characters - what I loved most was when I spotted a Polish name (makes me wonder if you too Dear Author, like me, are Polish ;) ). It's still pretty early but I think both the characters and the world are evolving nicely.
I have one recommendation - the dialogue options would be more visible and it would be easier to read if you'd use B or I with them - it is a bit tiring on the eyes without it <3
I hope Dear Author you'll see this as an encouragement to keep writing. One day you'll get more words like this, so keep it up - sharing your imagination with the world is a beautiful thing, so don't stop :)
