Martial Ascent: The Unrivaled Path - Reviews

Martial Ascent: The Unrivaled Path
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I've been reading this on and off for a few years now. This was one of my guilty pleasures.To be completely honest, the story was a mess. The author would forget about things that were said to be very important, all of the antagonists where the same, and there was practically no character development.There was also that last chapter. There is too much to comment on when it comes to the last chapter. It was incredibly rushed. I mean, the biggest, baddest antagonist was defeated in one hit? There were also drastic time-skips at the end to excuse the power scaling that was going on. I forget because it's been so long, but how many chapters did the first month of the game take up?Another thing is the whole explanation of God's Domain. Creating additions three dimensional spaces? If there's going to be a sequel I can understand why there would be such an explanation and why they started another whole journey. If there is not going to be a sequel, I could have really done without it. It really just got me curious.I'd say my favorite part of the story, and the reason I stuck with it for so long even though it was a mess, would be the world and system. I really don't understand how the world and power system can be so well thought out when the plot is such a mess.There is so much to talk about when it comes to the power system. The levels are complemented by tiers, which come along with their own intricacies. There are skills that are divided by tier along with combat techniques divided by rarity. The equipment system is also very well thought out with the different rarities and level limits. I found the city/NPC systems interesting too.As a word of warning, I don't think I could binge read this because it's so repetitive. It mostly maintained my interest because I was caught up with it, so I had a break after reading a few chapters.TLDR: The plot is a predictable mess, but because of all the interesting stuff that gets brought out, it's still a fun read.
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Please continue the story, its extremely well writen. Theres no others books like this one..................................................?????.
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bad grammar confusing story.............
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So far all the stories i have read by this author are completely captivating and only reason i did not give it 5 out of 5 in all categories is like most avid readers i was totally heart broken when this one got put on back burner for what ever reason pleaze don't have lost all inspiration for this story and finish it i an dyeing to find out what comes next.
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Story is great fun, and the fantastic struggles of ANThony are detailed herein. The few side POVs really help to flush out the world building and provide context for the story environment.
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invisible dragon:i won 600 lords and i even recovered so i am stronger than before!
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"Mummy, don't worry, nothing happened. I am fine. It's just that Ashi had vomited on me earlier and I needed to change my clothes. That's all." Bhumi made up a lie trying to protect her mother-in-law but forgot the obvious truth that Ashi had been sleeping with Dev's mother ever since Bhumi had herself left her there. Dev's mother pretended to believe Bhumi's lie, and asked Bhumi to sit besides her. Bhumi sat down, stroking Ashi's hair, and said nothing more. It's funny how so often, in order to protect those close to us, we leave them alone in darkness with nothing but their misunderstandings and lies for company.
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colored hair with a single streak of white of her bang which was swept to the left. Her cyan eyes were curt and stoic, but the bead of sweat that was slowly falling down her cheek proved otherwise
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Saiph felt a slight base urge to comment 'wolves,' but naturally refrained from such a childish action.

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