Marshfellow: The Softest of Them All - Reviews

I enjoyed the story when i could read it properly, but the translation recently has been absolutely terrible with repeated duplicate chapters and completely missing chapters in between.

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This is just trash after chapter 40, things stop making sense and Mc become a brain dead hero

I enjoyed this story alot. The vampire princess and exorcist who is said to help take world over with her in prophecy and their funny interaction.I am looking forward to more.Thanks for work author.

The plot and development is very good, but the writing quality can be better, use a stronger verbs and cut the less redundant information. Also, id recomment splitting the paragraph into a smaller substance will make it easier to read. Last but not least, make the transition more concise and smoother transitions between the setting......  a Very good read tho. Id like to check your other works.

Kingdom Building, Business, and System  are my favorite genres, but it's a shame there's no harem here! I'm very curious to see what kind of business is developed in this Fantasy world! Also, I think the chapters are too short!!!

"Aahhh... Are you going to your mother?"

Izuku and Todoroki headed up to the floor that held the rocket they were supposed to protect. Both teens stared at the rocket. It was quite large, but that was to be expected, really.

I remember it vividly,

"When will you hold that party?"

"This is how it is done, if you want to use a bow as a weapon pay attention to your posture and your breathing so that you do not miss the target," explains the elf.

"Miss Qingling, do you want to have breakfast in this room?" A maid servant asked her. Qingling shook her head.