MANIFEST: The Last Adventure of Sain - Reviews

Hey author,i like you work but at the beginning you have typo and grammar errors.since im idle i edited it for you for free,if you want it,ill send it via email.its only chapter 1 today coz its already 2 am here,maybe i do some more later

Very nice ...................................................Yay!

This was certainly something……. There were so many different issues. To list one of them. Author or translator was too lazy to figure out how western names are. They should have never translated the names. The naming sense is ridiculous “white Vivian”. Also this story is pretty confusing and the way people talk is extremely weird. This needs an editor.

Definitely the type of novel I would read.Grammar has little to no errors. Prose and narration are fluid, descriptions are conveyed with intricate details. Dialogue is good also. Nothing much I could really critique. Definitely one of the gems here at WN. Keep up the good work.

Updates don't count.Firstly, It had opportunity to be good. But There are too many inconsistencies. The author says one thing and then contradicts itself in next chapter. These are not big contradictions or anything, simply lazy and leaves bad vibes. Nothing major thought. The Author tries to make MC hide strength and in the first few chapters it would have be ok. But it doesn't make sense One and secondly, it makes the world feel stupid.In addition, it is stupid to hide strength than all powerful Ranking system pretty much spills the beans.Lastly, the translation is not good, but it is not bad either.Overall, I would not recommend it.

Summary alone gives me huge hopes, giving it a temp 5 star till I come back to edit it after enjoying the chapters laid out so far ??

This is spectacular! Even with just 15 chapters, the author has managed to capture my heart. Five stars! no doubt. Don't believe me? well just read it! If this isn't a cool blend of fantasy and slice of life I don't know what is. I just hope the author doesn't give up on this, I'll send powerstones to support just keep up the good work author cheers!

chapters too short. world is decent story is developing well can't say much about updating stability with how new it is. character design is devent. honestly i do have some bias but im trying to be as genuine as posible.

The misty skies of the white capped mountains covered the wonder like a fragile child. It's a usual day for a little crow on these mountain range. Standing here may get you some credit as a human, but being a bird that wakes up and sleeps on these peaks everything's just ordinary.

"Hun I, urhm I was urhm..."

Mark's P.O.V.

My house is an extremely common household, there's no such thing like a secret medicine passed down for generations, much less of having a Japanese ninja's lineage