Main Male Leas Disqualified - Reviews

Oh no Grandma Beatrice!!!! I hope Corrine will be in the story soon to eliminate Thalia! Damn it!!! Thalia is cold blooded than Sophia!

cuz i like hbs lol ........................

I love this fanfic, I’ve always wanted an mc with empathic mimicry from heroes. Please continue to upload more man, don’t give up on this fic

Obligatory one star review, I saw that the translator came into the review section asking people to stop giving one star reviews, so I figured I'd come and be spiteful because most of my favorite novels have been dropped before being finished so why not, right? Maybe if I was busy reading my favorite novels, I wouldn't have time to be spiteful. But now that I have so much free time....

Why is the He written inseid quotation marks?Is he a female actually?OrIs he in deep stages of denial.                                           .

I made it to chapter 36. It's was okay at first, it was going for the typical op main character that never loses and that's fine but there was no real comedy, interesting world building or anything that made up the boring plot. The main character is copy and past template of others, his only redeeming factor is he is not as psychotic as he could be and isn't as thirsty as most mc's. I like some op mc novels but this isn't one of them

This novel is really good, it's sheer quality makes me want even faster updates, anyways here's my review.Writing Quality - ★★★★★ I've read many novels here on the platform although I'm pretty new I can defintely say that your novels are one of the best in this platform, the quality of this novel in writing is amazing.Story Development - ★★★★★The development of your novel in my opinion is great, not too slow and not too fast. The MC isn't the strongest/OP right away but he gradually develops although not too slow which I like.Character Design - ★★★★★ Although the story hasn't finished exploring all the mysteries of the MC and his college life I can safely say that everything is consistent and good from the emotions shown to the mysteries that are yet to be revealed.Updating Stability - ★★★★Although the updates are fast, consistent and contain quality they are not the fastest on the platform. But don't take me wrong, the updates are consistent and have quality which matters over quantity.World Background - ★★★★VR game backgrounds are all alike/similar to each other but I frankly love what you did with the story, especially the mystery about the MC's life and who he really is, I'm looking forward to when that'll be revealed.

Why is face-slapping tag a thing? Isn't that just filler? Do people enjoy that? .....................................................................

This book is is great and even better then being good is that for 180 chapters it is free. Words words words words words words words words

The novel is quite good. The MC desired to cultivate is understandable. The background characters act quite reasonably.The MC has a very powerful artifact but he did not actively use it and stride to increase his power with his knowledge and hard work. The subplots are surprisingly decent, some problems the MC has been resolved quite naturally and did not feel like force conflict. 60 chapters and not a hint of romance, it's a good chance of pace.

Story OK. To be fair the author did say its his first novel and he isn't a native English speaker. And it shows. Badly. I've dropped it. I rarely drop books just because of writing quality but I couldn't continue.This was as bad as mtl. The bad ones. BUT if you can handle mtl or are not a native speaker then this isn't really a problem. As this was also the authors first work, other problems such as story pacing, character progression, character interaction and behaviour all needs work. Theres a lot of telling and very little showing. This comes with practice, time and experience.My advise to the author as simply a fan of light novels is to read more well written English novels. Not translated, but actual English novels. You'll pick up a lot and it'll help you construct your novels better in tbe future.For anyone who read all this and want an actual review.. Transmigration story where male MC gets into modern world with monsters. System makes him cultivate stronger. For once the original body isn't some begger or poor son which is actually refreshing. It's why I think this author with some work and experience can actually write a good novel in the future.

A villainous master?