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Title should be changed from "Guild Wars" to.."The God Who Has Orgies" or "I Win"MC is OP af at every stage.Literally goes from trash to god in ~30 chapters.No one shall touch my woman, I'd be a hypocrite if I touched other women. Proceeds to have endless relations with other women + orgies.Also finds out he's a literal god IRL within the first 50 chapters.
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in the start in this novel MC is coward but letter it's gets better so it's good and story development also very good . I really want more chapter to come i just hope author don't put love and harem in it i like MC the way it's please focus on beasts rather then some stupid girls .
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interesting concept, just the grammar that has a lot of problems........................................  .................. . ................
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So far so good, I just stopped at chapter 21 since I'm out of passes but it's a fun read. I like the Mcs powers but I think they need a more developed description, honestly, that's it, some things are rushed or glossed over and they don't need a long description but some easing into instead. like how I didn't even notice it was a 2-year time skip and am confused how she suddenly joined the military like what was the thought process behind that. but these might already be discussed later I'm just waiting to horde some more passes
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this story is really interesting and I hope it continues like this. to go into the details of why I liked then already even though an already popular theme the author managed to write an original story and that remains always interesting. moreover the main performance is rather well written when the other characters ben for the moment is not too much but saw how it starts I think the author will certainly continue to describe well and think of the other characters. author continuous like that
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Now, I'm an avid reader of this book and have made my opinion, its AMAZING, I know that if you like character development, some twists, and heartbreak (ow) you'll love this book! I used to read it because I was bored, but now I'm caught up with the chapters and I can't stop. (Also, if you ask nicely or meme hard enough, you might get a character featured after you!)
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The story is amazing, this power system is different and unique, makes me like it a lot, almost makes me want to write something similar, but credit is where credit is due, and nice job, I will be waiting for the next upcoming chapters keep up the good work!
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i love this work and story line with full of mystery and love
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" Like always Michaela is the only one that can convince you right, Aaron? " Amber smirks mockingly at Aaron
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My head ached. I felt a heavy weight on my chest as I woke up from under the warm sheets. I opened my eyes and caught a glimpse of dark hair on my breast. My first reaction was to sit up straight. As I did that the weight from my shoulder immediately slid of. I felt confused and  unewhere of my surroundings. As I looked around the room everything was unfamiliar except the face of the man lying naked bedside me. I could remember anything from last night... in fact I couldn't even remember who I was. I slowly got out the bed and grabbed an oversized shirt that I found on the floor and threw it on my naked body. I walked over to the window. A beautiful sight filled my eyes. I looked out onto a field of flowers. The sight gave me peace for a split second then I was dragged back to reality. Strong arms had slid into my shirt and had been tangled around my waist in a caressing way. A deep voice greeted me, "hullo Beautiful". I spun around jumping back at the same time. "Who are you?" I asked in a shocked way . "Why, don't you remember me? I wouldn't either if I was you." He said in a loud confiden voice. "Who are you," I asked again this time with more confidence in my tone of voice and less shockd. Then he replied, "if I was you I would like to know who I was before I know who someone else is. That being said wasn't last night too exciting". he started to smirk. "Who am I and what am I doing here, what happened last night and why are you still freaken naked?!" "All questions will be answered in due time. Your memory will soon be getting back to you. I promise." he said.
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"Yeah. You should. Anything isn't wrong with that?" I asked.

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