This desperately needs an editor and someone who understands chinese'isms. The english seems to be a word for word literal translation making it very difficult to understand what is happening.
It has some good elements to it with the VR zombies, but It's also clear that the author isn't a native English speaker. However, sometimes non-native speakers write the best books! Hope the author keeps improving, and keeps making the story more and more exciting! One thing I'd like to see is some action and build up immediately, but other than that it has a chance to hook you if you give it some time! Thanks, I hope you write at least an hour a day!
The story is written well, the characters are unique and original and you can easily see the effort the author put into this novel. I highly recommend giving this novel a try!
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"Don't come this door... blah blah" she looked outside the window and saw the tall tree with it's branch extending near the window and thought of something.
"It's alright! I knew that the first time, it would sting. I was prepared. You did not hit me." The attendant was trying to calm Alexa and usher her back down so they could continue.
