Mage Path: darkness born in flesh - Reviews

I really liked it how it begins but Bro you make no sense and i really can't get myself to read more .You basically waste all his points and literally everything he has on his gf and wait a minuite isn't she already as strong as Saint 9 -_- -_-.Sorry but this really pisses me off and i really don't get myself to read it with his gf.The first thing she does after they met in the new world is ....nothing.He gave her all this and she just stands ther like it is natural that he does this for her and it pisses me off how he is so weak compared to his gf and lrt's look back.He has 7 wishes and his gf is basically on top of the world from the start and he is like a bug /ant and it would all have been okay if she would be more thankful but she isn't he sents 1 million from 5 million of his points for stones she can use and she doen't even says anything and just stsrts to cultivate ??????OK i stop writing because i would just get worse .The idea is really great and i would love to read this story if either ...1. His gf doesn't exits.2. She is much more thankful to him.3. You don't make her as strong as she is from the beginning but either the MC should

Translation is deadIt's been more than 50 days without any new updatesIdk if it's due to webnovel or the translatorBut a dead novel is a bad novelSo, there's no point reading

it's like pizza very delicious and well  um.... good? .......................................................................................

I honestly think this is really good. The writing isn’t amazing but I like the storyline. I hope that the writer is consistent with the uploads and I believe that this could become a really great story

"Ah Zhe," the elder brother sigh, "this might not seems fair to you, but this is what he have to live by. What our father and younger sister did were considered as treason. They're plotting against the royal family! If His Majesty wishes to follow the appropriate punishment, both of us will not be sitting here right now. We will either be dead or be sent to the labour camp."

You see a dark figure swimming down and grab your hand. The figure pulls you up with ease.

Avery reached the palace swifly, the stern gates of white wood were open, with the guards smiling at him as he approached.

Thanks for the chapters more chapters pls!!

If you mean imperial harem maybe but not to sure

Hey author, don’t drop the novel please

In my opinion, this story is very good.. but in some parts, there are mistakes in the writing. Maybe I understand because you are just learning to write, and for the character design there are no illustrations but Judging from the description of some of the characters, it's quite interesting... the downside is the character illustrations, but stay enthusiastic!

it's a good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it