MAFIA'S DREAM WIFE - Reviews

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Basically, the main character is flawless.  He never loses, never makes mistakes, he has the most beautiful woman in the universe following him for who knows the reason, he is the only one capable of making women fall in love with him.  It's all a bit hidden by his personality, but it's deep down there. Btw a personality that he acquired with some skill because the author was too lazy to develop and simply created a skill for all the abrupt change. It's good enough to read when you have nothing to do, but that's it. Nothing new.

Unique transmigration novel with unique characters (MC as well as several side characters). I don't clearly understand why everyone wants character development in a novel but I like most of the novels with unique characters and their interactions. By the way this novel has one of the most intriguing interactions.

Ok so mc is weak and finds metal ball which fuses with him, he instinctually knows how to use it, ok. Makes some sense if you think magic. Then mc gets a gene from food rather than killing an animal, unique. I like. That was chapter 1, from there it goes downhill rapidly. We are introduced to our first trope in chapter 2 or 3 in which we learn that the loser mc is friends with the martial school goddess, at this point every comment i read is people complaining or saying they drop because im leaving out some other reasons this is one star. Anyways, loser mc friends with goddess at start trope, check. Heres where the author makes a bigger mistake, 2 is not better than 1 if people hate 1, especially when the second goddess you add instantly after is the mcs little sister and the guys at the school are jealous of your "luck" with women when ONE OF THEM IS YOUR SISTER!!! Not even stepsister, and i know that wouldnt justify things but a lot of these authors try to justify with that excuse. Also mc stupid and him fighting Du Quan was clear plot force and will lead to cockroach young master being born just cause mc was stupid and chose to fight him when he had no need to, only a made up benefit which even the mc said that he coulda learned at any moment (the wolf technique). I hope this stops some from reading, this is just as bad as legend of the mythological gene and is just chasing after the old fame of it before it got nationalistic.

The novel is great,  but the translation and dialect seems weird at times.......... . Also all the characters seem to use the same tone..........

Up to chapter 35 review.So first I'm going to give honest props to a self-published work that's pretty decently written especially considering that English may not be this person's primary language.I'll also say that although it seems pretty quick I generally lean towards faster powerups and faster fights.   The MC definitely taking the starting strong route and keeps it blazing - and no antagonist really gives him a fight of any consequence so far.Now to the parts I don't like.   While I guess I'm ok with the s*xy but not quite ultimate beauty being his first, it really felt like it went super fast.   As in underage fast.  More problematic is that there were then developments to show this will probably end up as a harem novel as of course his immature eyes start wandering.But then we get to Chapter 35.   I don't know why this is a thing in some CN novels but it is very disturbing when now this happens at an underage level.   So I'll just say it - r*ape is wrong and even more so against children.   You and all the sick f*cks who love this kind of violent behavior can go to hell.  I hope you find mental help before you end up in jail living out all your decadent fantasies.   As for me, I'm done with this story.

So this would be a littbe bit spoiler for those who haven't read it,The concept of the story is quite interesting, instead overpowered or average mc, this mc however, lower than average... his suffering like without end just because being weak even weaker than a person without Qi. I think his honor and lust for revenge that would likely become the core of plot pushing-wheelThe story in my opinion is a bit rushing, especially first two chapters. I think in the beginning the readers should be given how the mc's life in the family that despise him like show them the kind side of the mc and how he sacrificed and protected the weak, in order to create a strong bond with the mc, so that when he eventually get banished, the readers would get the feeling of sorrow and empathy.Then the writting, I think it's the punctuation, especially lack of coma and then the "tone color" of the dialogues to give the characters, charachters.Overall the story is unique even tho this is the first martial art-based novel I read. With the time, you'll eventually become a great writer!.....Sincerely,~ Houraji Ballare

I read the book and I hate it. Let me explain why. If you have seen the synopsis of "Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start

Reading raws, atm at 1.2k chapter. MC weak and 99% times saved by luck or someone. If you want to read wizard novel sorry, this novel just like your average novel where mc always run. 100-200 chapter - best ones. Almost just like wizard style novel.201+ get worse but readable.Novel have 2k+ chapters atm and nothing much changed. Even short story parts that can end up in 5-10 chapters get increased by x10 times.Way too much water.

I would recommend author of this story attemtp writing this story again after growing up a little bit, cause it really looks like kid writing doctors degree philosophy research after reading one from internet. The mc has no logic in his actions. I would expect some expert style moveset from mc that can play around with police by refueling his bike on high speed and shooting down a copter easily but then he acts like 8 year old moron (kids act more logical than this mc). Out of logic parts is about whom adress his hatred, not understanding the "will

There are only few chapters but so many things already happened. I can see the hint of world building, the development is also good. Language is also fairly good.There were some problems, but over all decent novel. MC has no goal right now, but I saw Author's comment that he will give him goal through journey, so let's see. I don't like MCs without any proper goal.

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