Mafia System: Return of the Leader - Reviews

I just finished this novel [Raw (microsoft translator)] and I love it!!! As always no end satisfy me, but the jurney that the MC go through is really enjoyable and exiting. I really recoment this novel for everyone that loves a empire building and...... face smacking.One thing that I super like about this novel was that is able to manage time skip really well and never let the story go dull and boring. Eventhough the las 50 chapter went super fast, they do not lacked on hype or excitement.

Well, since mostly everyone who hasn't even read the book seems to be giving it 5 stars, I guess I'll make a comment on how disgusting, inconsistent and outright infuriating this MC and novel in general seems.From what I've read(other peoples' thoughts) the MC is a horny little **** who seems like the type to ***** over his own faults, then get free stuff thrown at his lap, in order to make the novel as appeasing as possible to all those sad, horny fucks out there.It's probably one of those no-brain, no-personality harems where no girl sticks around for longer than a few chapters, after which she's just a part of the ****fest once in a while, and no girl really has any personality whatsoever. Nor do they have any personality flaws.This is one novel I'll never read, don't be fooled by the "C31" I'm no on that ch, I just happened to click on it as this novel was updated.

First of all, wait until you read at least five chapters before forming an opinion. The first two chapters are quite small and ordinary, but the story quality gives a super jump (and I mean it) after the third one. The author increased the amount written after the third chapter as well. What really caught my attention is the MC and how the world thinks about the wisp, and I've never seen a wisp MC before. Another excellent point in this story is the MC cheat. This one was very well thought, and really well elaborated.

Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ?!

Well there aren't enough chapters to actually give  constructive criticism but still the story seems interesting and a little new, will give a better review when there are more chapters.One advice though, try to improve character interactions their interactions don't feel that natural yet.For now adding it to my "to read in a month" list

Chapters r too short. Had it been written by Mrdojo(writer of the original webnovels 'The 7 Realms' and 'The Necromancer system') this novel would have been finished within 80-85 chapters.Also the grammar isn't that appealing. And for those ppl who keep saying - 'Thos novel is trash. I dropped it after 3/4 chapters.' well, that's your fault. Most novels start their stories after a few chapters. This is one of them. It's not the best novel but certainly not the worst either (if we not bother too much abt grammar which is the problem with most webnovels on this site?)Lastly, this is more of a 'narration' type novel. They tend to forecast future happenings(which r already obvious to readers. Such as - MC will become a powerhouse. Or as, he will marry a beauty).

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Still, Sasha was content with this life.

Powerful creatures can sense elements. More specifically the element that evolved them. When they sense it coming from somewhere they want to inhabit that place. Comfort leads to breeding, it is science really, the continuation of cells.

body craving food

"Why did you want my number?" I heard him say. I looked at him. His stopped in his tracks. His stance changed. His hands fidgeting behind his back and head hung low.

Aku : " ayah adalah ayah yang terhebat untukku"