I think that the protagonist is quite dumb at first, I mean there are like so many people who are immortals but he only notice three years after he came.
Good work for a novice writer. The novel has potential. It's just that the streams of events happen very quickly.The characters are well written. If the author continues to improve himself, I'm sure his future works will be outstanding. I hope the author doesn't lose his motivation.
With every copper ore found, Li Fuchen would do a detailed sweep of its surroundings. Pressing on the floor or on the walls, using his qi and consciousness to explore within.
The seed started small, but as if it just found the food it so desperately needed, tendrils started whipping out and lashing for more space. The comfort Grant felt was now gone, and in its place was the most intense pain imaginable.
Despite the warm day evening was pleasant in the west garden because so many plants and vines of flowers were got watered in the evening and air lightly got clammy by the time.
Armada:" See akatosh? I told you. But the one thing thats bugging me is. WHY is it a JP trope? This is a fucking wuxia novel! Where the fuck's the relation to JP tropes? Is it cuz my name's Armada that the Script Writer's force this shit? Mate it's not even a funny joke!"
