Mafia My Heart - Reviews

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First of, great work author, interesting storyline, and well-written chapters( spotted no grammar error) even though I just started reading, I'm already hooked, I really like how the first chapter was written, the author has done such a great job at designing the characters too. So keep up the good work author. I'm sending you my best wishes.??

I normally don't do reviews, because I am an author as well and it takes too much time to even considered but my God, this piece of work can only describe as a masterpiece it is slow paste but it is done beautifully the mystery in it is also amazing in my opinion the world-building is superb, overall this is a good book that will make you question a lot of things, honestly, it is worth my time can't wait for more.

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Amazing book, nice grammer and everything is just incredible!!Keep up the good work m8!!!...............................................

Actually, I'm poor at understanding this kind of story. Wow! But this one is easy to read and imagine the scene. Try it! You won't regrer

This is a good system novel, the author did a great job in giving us the information about the characters they are on point and very easy to understand, I read a lot of system novels and this one is really good, I suggest you give it a try even the writing quality is good.

This series is a masterpiece. If there are people who can't even handle some non blood related incest in a fictional story. Idk, man....   

Definitely has the potential to be a very interesting read. Hopefully it gets picked. .................................................................

First off, I couldn’t even get through 20 chapters. When I put character design at 2 stars, I mean that the characters all share the a collective iq of a fly. It’s actually horrendous. The author tries to introduce character development and internal struggles at stupid times, and it’s just painful. I feel like this has a lot of potential, but the execution and actual design were very poor. Anyways, best of luck to the author in future stories!

Hello guys I am the author of this book. If you are tired of seeing bullied, dark past, sister relationship, family problems and the same cliché stories. Then this novel is for you all.

That fight lasted as long                                                                                                                                  as i thought it would.