Good premise but bad execution. the story itself is just a repetative cyle of the Mc trying to make his dungeon bigger and better, and the outladish actions of the gamers for comedic effect. rinse and repeat then call it a story. If you are looking for something unique look elsewhere, you have been warned. but if you got nothing to read its good enough to stave off boredome.
Love the story very much! Great and neat translation! Correct and clear words and usage! Grammatically correct and easy to understand! Overall, a great work!!
Nicely done although the story is slow in progress. Over all the story is good but I can day it's quite interesting to read. In my preference its just lacking a little bit in story telling. The jump in of scenes are one of those. But just a little.
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Well, of course, the country of Russia and the mainland of Africa have become enemies, and the United States is the kindest and sweetest ... (If there are mistakes, then excuse me, English is not my native language, I am from Eastern Europe)
But now I think that maybe I shouldn't have given them that much credit, that maybe I should stop placing my trust on people entirely; because right now - a mere ten minutes after convincing myself that we'd be fine, I feel like I might be staring at the final stinking piece of the puzzle I thought I'd already solved.
