MTL shit. Not even properly edited. Dog shit onomatopoeia. This should be categorized as MTL.As for the story itself, it's your typical Chinese webnovel.
Although there is yet chapters to be done, the story is progressing like any other wuxia style or martial art style light novel. I give this a 5 stars for now until proven otherwise.
The catchy plot is interesting to read through. The author made a unique story in a trapped-glitch game cliche that everyone should follow up and read every coming chapter
I think it is extremely well written so far and can't wait to see what is to come in the future. The writer is extremely good but I did not find anything that stands out overall
FINALLY SOMEONE WHO GETS IT. having a harem is bad ,back when i first started reading on webnovel I used to think that harems are okay but webnovel made me realize that harems are bad the hard way now i hate harems.......
The novel is just regular in the first two chapters and then bam! The action starts, everything is good and am really hooked but if i may suggest, i'd like to author to cut down the paragraphs a bit.
"Fine. Do what you want. However!" Donne raised his finger," she must go home for now. Her parents are really worried. I told them that she is training under me and can't be disturbed, but it's been quite a few days, so I fear that they will panic."
Xiulan's anger suddenly disappeared and a happiness glint was evident on her eyes while she stares down the envelope. She really thought Hongqi would make her experience drastic measures to get that VIP pass.