Lyra´s Journey - Reviews

Started okay, but overall the story is just lacking and tropish as well.Characters feel flat. The MC faces no struggles. Oh he got kidnapped?? Next chapter he escapes. Oh he gets chased. Next chapter he’s no longer chased. Etc.Honestly just a sort of eh novel. Everythign else is sort of okay. But it just isnt very dynamic. Okay for a short read

Hi author here chapter 5 has been modified so please read it again...                           and if you like this novel please let me know through comments and rating this novel

The story has a great cast of characters, and the plot continues to build with each new episode. Hats off to the author .You're doing an amazing job, Malcolm.

I just started reading and somehow the story is good.. though there are a bit of clerical error and its quite understanding.???keep up... uou got a nice plot and how the story progress..?

'it needed to be done, shes an alright person right now but she'll become a proper b**** if she becomes obsessed' I reply calmly

Nang maisara na ang pinto ay napabuntong hininga ang dalaga.

The salesman grinned deviously, and held out a jade amulet. "You look like you have an affinity with this amulet. 50 gold coins! It's yours!" he said.

"Come on partner ... at least nobody tried to get close to us ... we were so weird that they all went away when they saw us go by, hahaha" - mentioned a Hiro proud of his plan.

"well done   jason"  

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

And all that glitters is gold

Wow really wow literally i enjoy your choice of words it make it look more mature and well thought the strory line is very goodupdate your book