The story started with a few cliches but they can be ignored as the story is very well presented. Every chapter is interesting, funny and keeps us looking for the next chapter.The writing quality is also very good, with just few minor errors every chapter or two. The story development, I feel is a bit fast but it is well balanced.Since its just the beginning of the story, we'll have to see about the character development. And since it was said that it is a parallel world similar to earth, not much details are needed for the world background.Overall, a good story with quality writing and fun and interesting to read.
