Luna And The Alpha’s - Reviews

The world building at the start is cool, E.g the kind of uneven start and the God Class in general, but the character interactions are really garbage. His friend is annoying and the background story with his past gaming experiences is also utter bullshit.Maybe check it out for the setting but it’s a drop for me.

Feels like plot armor. And the only good think about MC is his memory -> that was given as a golden spoon from author.Over all since casting spells is based a lot on memory and mc got perfect memory we can all guess how pointless this book will be.And you can already see face slapping by mc at 7chapter and it will probably get worse.

Author again here I would like to apologise for some mistakes in Chapter 9 it's corrected now please read it again.???????and please tell me if there is any other mistake in upcoming chapters I will try my best and correct the mistake with in 3 hours and try not to do it again.happy reading.....and sorry again.

I don't really read books about zombies and stuff, but this one is really amazing. The writing style is great and interesting. Good work! Keep working on it!

He, then stood up and prepared to move to the stadium on his call.

"What?!" Old man Gu exclaimed in shock. The once golden castle wall was turning slowly into a diamond and the regeneration increased in alarming rate. The pitch black meteorite was being pushed slowly and the once broken outer wall was slowly fixing itself.

"There is no need for 'Mr' thing. Just call me Huki or old man!"

"I want them found and taught a lesson. Scare them as much as possible. AnnaLee pay them a visit before I do and find out what they will do in return for my car. If they don't comply, I'll see them myself." At this point, I wasn't in a good mood Naomi. I was Despair, the oldest of the twins, daughter of Time. They both nodded and left my office, leaving Lilac looking pale in her seat. I sigh and wipe my mouth "Now, I want you to be completely honest with me here Lilac." I say my voice filled with hate as I stood up and leaned against the front of my desk. "Who are you? Where are you really from and what is your connection to the Romano household." At this point I knew my aura changed and the mood of the room darkened, she gulped. "I really am from the East Side, my name is Lilac Shard I'm 22. The Romano family hired me and my cousins to work for them, take care of the house...but that house..those people they're monsters. It's like they're not human at all. One of the twins your sister spoke about became fond of me and my cousin Sage would always make us do the most bizarre things for his own pleasure. I stepped out of line when he and his boys were ganging up on Sage... I received her punishment instead. I took the first opportunity I could to get out. My cousins are still there."

Alojzia, who was carrying Shridevi in her arms to the side scoffed, "The Heavens said you were brought from far away, but not from where exactly. If you're trying to talk to the Heavens, it's futile. You think they would answer you?"

Up trrus bro

Honestly you should give this a try so far it’s very intriguing You will be hooked after reading the first few chaptersInnocent is actually one of the few good authors on this app, and whenever you see “anti hero” or “villian” in his book tags just know he’s gonna definitely deliver..And it has yandere in the title.. soooo that makes it even better ?

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?