Luck is a Charm - Reviews

I like how the story is shaping up. He has an OP attribute in the form of luck, which is quite unique. I can also see the improvements in your writing quality.

The one thing I want to see is some kind of a rule around how his luck works. As far I have read, he doesn't seem to be lucky everywhere he goes. When does it activate? What are its limitations? Those are some of the things I would like to see.

Wow, this novel is good. Though some wording choices I could do without, but the story itself is amazing. First POV written and you can immerse yourself as you read. The MC is an interesting character and the events that are heading to a great place!
Author! You are doing so well! Keep it up!

LOVE IT!
your writing skills are so extraordinary, please teach me.
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This is a great fun adventure read. I don't know what that other reviewer is whinging about the protagonist being annoying. I found him hilarious. His personality makes this story much more humorous and refreshing than your average webnovel. Also had to feel for the poor guy, hated by his own shoddy parents for apparently bringing them bad luck. I can fully understand him hating them and being happy they're dead. I enjoyed reading his adventures in the fictional world he soon finds himself in. Here's hoping he pulls through and makes the hot girl his wife haha. From a technical standpoint, the writing is of a good quality with minimal typos and the prose flows nicely. I highly recommend this to anyone looking for a good fun adventure story with plenty of humor.

Nice writing. U have great imagination author. With constant update, i think this story will be amazing. The story is also very creative. It's very well written. Good job

ok here is an honest review and i personally think that your story is great for your first time and i find your MC really interesting . Keep it up n good luck

As a newbie, the author has done a tremendous job. Just read few chapters and I am hooked to it. It is truly an amazing read. From what I read, this novel is like a sun ray in a sky filled with dark clouds. The descriptions, plots, characters everything is really good, except some errors, but those can be edited later. I would surely recommend this novel anyone who enjoys reading fantasy novels, just like me

You have more views and 6k legit readers but I refuse to lose towards you!

(I'll give your novel a proper review when I finish reading it)

I have decided to write my second review after having 63 chapters so far and I want to let you know a few things. One, this is my first novel so it's not a surprised for you to see so many flaws in it. Two, I never written a novel chapter format before but I have learned as I continue to write more.

Now let's go to the pros and cons of this novel.

Pros
Stability in update of course is great and the storyline is unique in it's own way as the protagonist does not "follow the book" rules.

It has some comedies and light-heart moment in a serious situation. The MC may seem like a simp but he's not because he has no lover like many  male out there. Therefore, it's hard to know how to act around a female considering his inexperience.

Not much pros as this novel is just the beginning of me writing in an impulse.

Cons
Let's say the grammars and tense could really make the story a bit confusing but smart readers should understand my meaning. Of course, if you found some wrong use of tense, do let me know so I can fix it and not look like a fool.

The POV aka point of view does changes multiple time through out the novel but as I'm writing this review now. I have fully decided to get rid of the first POV to third POV as it's easier and gives me a wider range in story telling.

The fight scene are not that great given I don't specialize nor have experience in how to portray one. But I will try my best to improve it and please be lenient for once.

Overall, I didn't rate myself highly since most of the category is either a 3 star or 4star except for my stability of updates. I just hope you will give me a chance as a new writer in here.

Thank you for reading my really long review. (However, a review should be this long to begin with xD)

I don't want to bash you in, like the other guy did on his review. i know this is your first novel and your still improving but am gonna have to drop.

Your mc is just way to annoying, i really did try and read more, but at this point am just skimming through chapters.

(Mc problems)
1: The fact the he actually paid for the wand that was disposable was just bad, he could have still made excuses or try to haggle over the wand, you think he would learn a thing or two over haggling because he grew in that type of environment, but no, He didn't.

2: Some what the same problem, butcher guy was to ripping him off but as soon as he thought that the butcher guy was helping him with the girl, he dropped everything thing because he thought he was a "man of culture" for helping him with the girl.

3: MOST ANNOYING PROBLEM OF THEM ALL! Annoying simp mc, Jesus Christ the first pretty girl that he meets he instantly goes monke mode for her, I can't imagine what would happen when he meets someone like a Princess or a Queen, that look more beautiful than her or some other higher being that's more beautiful.

This is the author here writing his review. Of course I be rating myself 5 star because it my novel.

Although I may sound confident, this is my first novel ever written and I tried to include multiple genres into the story to be more interesting.

After writing each chapter, I would use a reader's perspective to read and see what is wrong and how it should be improved. Sometime, I would find typos or a line does not fit so I would go back to Inkstone to fix the mistake and re-update it.

The first chapter is an excellent hook. I could see why the people would say the MC is annoying, but he seems like a realistic college student. I'm going to keep up with this story.