Love On Lease - Reviews

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Hello all, this is just my personal bias review for this new work. I had found that the VR Game genre could use a little bit more twists, and an added fantasy element to spice things up a bit as we have so many of the other ones around. I am doing this for fun, and also the Spirity Award Contest, and based on the results shown here I'll determine whether to push the series further, it will be a long story with a deep plot, very interesting character with their own back story and goals, along with a secret treasure as they main goal for all who chases their desires. Please do enjoy, and if you love it, support with a review of your own :)

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A good start. The MC was conflicted with his own feelings. What was left to him after the title? Decent writing from the author, not jumble-up words or unnecessarily long sentences and info dump. All the best author

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

Good Book. Some inconsistencies and forced narrative shifts but overall much better than generic cultivation novels. Has a strong female character in the initial chapters, no flowery Jade skin descriptions. Light novel done right.

Interesting so far. Looking forward to reading more. I think the build up is on point. Don't  know where do Story is headed though which  is a good thing coz it keeps you guessing.

The 20th review for this great work. Even numbers are cool.

"I guess that's a no?"

And a hologram projected SSS The receptionists was shucked

"Thawab Fiyyin? Kenapa aku baru menyadarinya jika selama ini Fiyyin pasti memiliki Thawab di istana. Kau tahu, semua rencanaku gagal karena dirimu terus saja memberitahunya tentang rencanaku. Sangat menyebalkan!" Vaqsyi berdecak kemudian memegang dagu Thawab kasar. "Bagaimana dengan hukuman potong lidah lalu hukuman gantung. Bukankah menarik? Atau kau bisa meminta pengampunan dariku dengan syarat mengkhianati tuanmu?"

I only laugh madly in my mind.