i am so in love with this book. it's awesome. the plot, character description, flow of the story everything is awesome. I would surely recommend to read this book.
You’re slipping, the chapters in the late 3000’d and early 4000’s You’re repeating chapters with different names, and mixing up the chronological Order of some of the chapters That’s some serious stuff you need to fix it or eventually people will start chucking the story
honest to God this will degrade your brain cells until there is no brain anymore if you're going to ask why just read to chapter 7 and you would get it I definitely can't keep reading for the ones who giving fake reviews shame on you???? anyway don't take my word for it just read a few chapters and you'll see
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I hop you won’t take offense in this, but consider editing your book. I suggest using grammar-checking apps like Grammarly. This story has a nice premise, but it would be better if you touch up the grammar, spelling, and punctuations.
I stopped reading pretty quickly. I don't think English is the first language it's written in, but the names are a bit extensive to read every other sentence.
