Love Me Again! - Reviews

Definitely some issues with this novel. The MC's rapid rise to the top of the class and the abysmal romance/drama made it one of the worst fictional experiences I've had. It started going downhill around chapter 200 out of 350, and the last 50 were a painful struggle to finish. The ending was even worse, and I've encountered some truly bad endings in my time. The MC felt detached from humanity, and the connection between their reincarnation and the system's existence lacked interest. The romance was atrocious and unnatural, while the author's portrayal of teachers revealed a lack of understanding. Additionally, the story heavily promotes Chinese propaganda and showcases a simplistic dichotomy between the Dragon Empire (China) and the Western Empire (USA). The latter half was marred by nationalism, forgotten characters, rushed plot points, and an abominable ending. Despite the initial promise, this novel ultimately disappointed me.

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Sorry, your writing is not that bad but this story felt dry to me. It's boring and that poor, suffering and abandon MC cliché is well kinda cliché. Read until chapter 9 hoping for a glimpse of humour somewhere but none to be found. Life is already depressing enough. Where is the struggle if everything is given by a system. Good clear cut writing though. It's like reading a text book.

I still haven't read any chapter yet, just the synopsis so I will give three  neither good nor bad.Anyway, I only have one way to describe this based on the synopsis

I don't know why it's receiving so many 5 stars. Ok it's true that story is bit interesting but that is all there is to it as for the cons:1. story is so inconsistent that it makes me want to smash my head to a wall for example in first chapter author said that here countries have different name and there is  no countries like china, USA etc then suddenly 10 chapters later there is ancient Chinese literature and a robbery which takes place in new Zealand. Status system is so random that it doesn't make sense at all. first his status increased when he was fighting, Then he suddenly can increase it himself, then it again went back to be randomly distributed wth it's like every chapter is written by different writer2. story flow is totally erratic sometimes a incident which have been foreshadowed for 3-4 chapters just happens in 4-5 lines and you'd be like 'have i missed a chapter'. plus bunch of details are given on color of streets and hair color of the people (Literally paragraphs) but when it comes to mc's power ups, status etc there is nothing at all. suddenly mc's increased his strength no description is given at all

Don't worry about the grammar. You can hire an editor for that. A proofreader can also do the job of finding plot holes for you. Now, zombie apocalypse novels are a tough genre. You need to research all weapons be it melee or firearms, etc. You also need to be realistic as it was a modern survival thing. I can see that the story is going good so far and it has potential. The direction of the story is also superb! Good thing is, the characters are lifelike. I hope you improve your craft shortly. Will wait for that time to come ?

Life has taught me that you can't control someone's loyalty. No matter how good you are to them, doesn't mean they'll treat you the same. No matter how much they mean to you, doesn't mean they'll value you the same. Sometimes the people you love the most, turn out to be the people u can trust the least.

Very good glad your back, keep up the good work

"Remember, we have to get up before the sun rises at six so we can get to the air ship on time." His father warned.

She hands Hobi a box and he seems unfazed but i can see that pink tint on those ears - I have sharp eyes don't try me!

  "Urgh... what is up with me? I was doing so well yesterday too..."